D’Verse –Meeting the Bar: Songwriting and its Relationship to Poetry – Almost Loveable

Almost Loveable

On our first date you said

I like you

On our second date you said,

I can see where you’re comin’ from

On our third date you said

Honey you make me laugh

On our fourth date you took my hand

Looked me in the eye and said

 

Baby I love the way you smile

I love the way you look at me

I love the chocolates, and the candy

The flowers and the valentine

I’m not trying to be mean

When I say to you,

Baby you’re almost loveable

In every little thing you do.

 

Almost loveable has got to be better

Than not loveable at all

Every woman up until you

Has run away from me.

They take one look,

Listen to me speak

Then high tail it out of here

So I guess almost loveable

Is better than not loveable at all.

 

I love song lyrics; with the right melody you can say almost anything and still make a million dollars. I just can’t find the right melody!! For me poetry has to stand alone, with songs as I said you can say anything and hide behind a great melody.

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“I love hills”

Anja is doing an amazing job is supporting Livestrong by offering her art work to raise funds for this years Livestrong bike ride. Check out her work, if you can buy some, they will enhance any wall they hang on.

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The Cat People of Kagir Manor ~~ Part 4

Here is part 4 of our story. Hope you are enjoying the journey.

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If you haven’t read the other parts you can find them here:

Part one

Part two

Part three

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The Cat People of Kagir Manor

With two Purrs either side of them, they were powerless to stop what was happening as the Purrs stripped each man of their clothing. As the Purrs removed the clothing of the men,  they chatted back and forth amongst themselves showing little interest in the men themselves, but more on getting the job done.

Stripped naked the men were taken into the bathroom and told to shower. Once clean they were taken back to their respective beds and dressed in their new garments.

Michael’s blue outfit, a one-piece body type suit, was a good fit but he was feeling very conspicuous in it. The other men were dressed in red, green, yellow, and an unfortunate beige on Roger but as Michael thought, Roger was a beige sort…

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D’verse – Open Link Night ~ Week 131- Loss

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The sea was wild,

I stood on the sand

The wake swirling at my feet

Watching and waiting

Where were you?

Why would you do this?

To me?

Do I wait an eternity?

When do I give up?

When should I go home?

It was first light

I saw you were gone

A silly silly argument

Over manners of all things

You insisted, I resisted,

You stormed off

Slammed doors

I felt wretched

Sleep evading me

Tossing and turning

I didn’t hear you go.

Your towel crumpled on the sand

Your favourite shirt

Inside the house key.

Friends came rushing

Questions

Humiliation

I admitted guilt.

Search began

Police, lifesavers,

Helicopter hovering overhead,

Surfboat out

Nothing

Despair.

All day I stood there

Hope fading with each passing second.

It is near dusk,

The searchers are stopping

Light fading,

Tomorrow they say, first thing,

Friends move off,

Families to care for

I am left at the waters edge

Looking, waiting, desolate,

Beyond caring, resolving

To wait out the night

I sit in the sand

My head bowed.

It is near midnight

The tide is in, my clothes are wet

I sit up, remembering

Looking about.

Darkness is intense,

I’m staring into a black hole.

I sense movement,

Your hand slips into mine,

You grip my fingers

Lock your hand into mine,

I see your face, illuminated

Reflecting the overhead moon

I bend to kiss you……….

My breath in one great gasp

Is sucked in, held,

I am awake

The pain………

 Written for: http://dversepoets.com/2014/02/04/open-link-night-week-131/

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The Cat People of Kagir Manor – Part 3

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To catch up with the previous parts

https://summerstommy.com/2014/02/03/the-cat-people-of-kagir-manor-part-1/

http://jlroeder.wordpress.com/2014/02/04/the-cat-people-of-kagir-manor-part-2/

With the echoes of Hotel California in his mind Michael turned to see his four friends all looking towards him as if seeking direction and god forbid, guidance.

There was a cat like utterance heard and suddenly there was movement in the room. The guests all went back to what they were doing before the men arrived. Michael and his friends became aware of a new movement in the room.

Around the perimeter of the room was a line of smaller cat like creatures. The men were later to learn that these were the servant class or the ‘Purrs’, which had its own irony, as they didn’t purr at all. They spoke in low squeak tones, a language that was unique to them. They were overseen by the one cat person who most intimidated Michael and his friends.

This was Silkis, a large, what we might consider a tomcat, ginger and fierce looking. Even when he smiled he looked ready to devour you.

Silkis uttered a series of guttural noises and the Purrs sprang into action, two stood either side of each man.

The Purrs never made eye contact but rather each took the hand of the man they stood beside and led them up the stairs to where the men assumed their respective rooms would be.

Michael became aware of the Purr on his left, that it had the softest hand, and held his hand firmly, he had the impression the Purr was savouring the moment as if it had long awaited the feel of a human hand once again. He looked down on the tiny person, it’s eyes cast down, the top of its head the shape of the cats, triangular with the tiniest pointed ears.

They walked down a winding corridor and stopped outside a large wooden door. Silkis who had led the procession looked back at the line of men and

Purrs and as if checking to see that all were accounted for, opened the door and led the way into a large room, dormitory in nature, with beds spread around the walls. The Purrs took each man to his assigned bed.

The room had one smallish size window; there was a bathroom off to one side, a small table beside each bed and not a lot else.

At the end of each bed was a pile of clothes. They were colourful; each man appeared to have been assigned a different colour. All the while the Purrs held firmly to the men’s hands.

“This,” said Silkis, “Is where you will stay while with us. The clothing on the end of your beds is for you to wear. The Purrs will assist you in changing. It is important that you wear the assigned clothing at all times. Your own clothes will be kept for you. You wont be needing them for some time.”

Then smiling malevolently he took his leave leaving the men alone with the Purrs who still held each man’s hand firmly.

There followed a series of high-pitched sounds as the Purrs communicated with each other and each went to work on their assigned man.

 

This story is a collaboration between Michael at Morpethroad and myself. It began when we realized our Friday Fictioneer stories

http://jlroeder.wordpress.com/2014/01/17/friday-fictioneers-jan-17-2014/

And

https://summerstommy.com/2014/01/15/friday-fictioneers-the-manor-house/

Had a common ground and decided to try our hand at writing a story from this base. So this is the fruit of our labors, a lot of fun and always a pleasant exercise.

Part 4 will continue the story tomorrow on Jackie’s blog. Please keep reading and we love comments! Thank you.

 

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VisDare 47: Contemplating

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My mother attended all my dance concerts.  She liked to arrive early and would sit in the auditorium with her knitting and or crocheting quite content to wait out the hour or so before the concert began.

From my earliest age she had sent me to dance lessons. She loved sewing and the arrival home of the next dance costume was always greeted with great excitement as she planned to make my costume the best she could. The only item she didn’t like sewing were bugle beads. They looked fantastic on your costume as they dangled down from under your arm but the sewing onto the costume took hours and when my costume required bugle beads you could see her cringe at the thought of the long hours she’d spend securing them to my costume. Needless to say, she was the proudest mum at every concert I danced in.

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Friday Fictioneers – The Electric

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My grandparents grew up when kerosene lamps were the only form of lighting. When the electric arrived their old house became a beacon of light to all around. In their fascination they became hoarders of every form of lighting they could find. Grandad would scour the weekend papers looking for garage sales, jump in his car returning hours later with some new lamp they didn’t already have.

I always thought it a shame the house was too small for their collection and the spill over landed on the veranda.  Grandad always said, ‘You can never have too much light.’

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The Cat People of Kagir Manor ~~ Part 2

Here is Part Two of our tale of Kagir Manor, if you are new to the story there is a link on this page to take you to part one.

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The Cat People of Kagir Manor – Part 2

(If you haven’t read part one, you can read it here on Michael’s blog. (No relation to the character in the story)

 

 

And now here they were. Face to face with the Witch of Kagir Manor. She was as imposing as the legend said and she was at this very moment in his face.

 Her voice had an amazing allure to it. You couldn’t help but be drawn in by the tone in her voice. It was as if she was talking only to you and all you could do was allow her voice to wash over you.

 But more than that was the touching, her hands so lightly caressing and like the cat, she so resembled, she curled around you, her hands taking in every aspect of your shape. All the while…

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Haibun Thinking: Week 3 – Angel

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I feel wretched. The news has devastated me. I want to curl up and disappear but I know life doesn’t work like that.  With all eyes on me, shame and guilt written all over my face, I stood before them hearing their disgust. I had to run, get away, find this hole, a place of sanctuary, bury myself well away from the derision they are hurling my way.

Here I can take stock, listen to you, take in what you say away from the raucous taunts that I have been subjected to.

I know you are here, always here, sitting on my shoulder, my angel of love. You protect, you stick up for me, I know its you speaking through me when life goes awry. Right now its you I need, your shoulder to lean on, your words reassuring me it wasn’t my fault, I acted in good faith, I am ok.

Your love is unconditional, embrace me.

 

shame and derision

heart far greater than all life

love enfolds me

Written for: http://haibunthinking.wordpress.com/2014/02/04/haibun-thinking-week-3-february-4th-2014/

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The Cat People of Kagir Manor – Part 1

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Michael received this poster in his letterbox:

 

ATTENTION MICHAEL

Kagir Manor

The 13th Anniversary of the Witch Of Kagir.

You and friends are invited to attend a special event.

Please assemble at the entrance to Kagir Manor Road, 6pm

Saturday 23rd.

 

Michael thought the brochure was special as it named him specifically. So he contacted the boys to tell them, inviting them over to show them his personal invitation.

They thought it was a great publicity gag that someone was throwing and as they had nothing else to do they organized to meet at the appointed time.

Their journey into the misty evening was to be marked by adventure. They like everyone in the town had heard rumours that Kagir Manor was the home of the Cat People, a myth they all thought, as there had never been any proof found to support this claim.

After driving an hour in the mist they encountered three figures standing in the road.

These were people like they had not met before. Tall and fierce looking, very feline in appearance. As the men brought the car to a halt, the three figures approached and inspected their vehicle, their belongings and themselves. They conversed in a high-pitched language very catlike in tone.

The men were stunned by what they were seeing. The myth was no longer a myth. There really were Cat People. But how? None of the men felt the urge to question the Cat men who were inspecting their vehicle.

Eventually they were waved through and they proceeded further into the mist along the road to Kagir Manor.

Kagir Manor was an imposing building and shrouded as it was right now it looked even more imposing. They parked and made their way to the front door.

The ornate front door was answered by an equally awe-inspiring figure. This cat like man beckoned them into a huge vestibule. On entering the Manor, the men couldn’t help but feel this was not going to be as pleasant an evening as they had envisaged.

Inside the foyer of the Manor a large number of Cat People were gathered. Both sexes resplendently dressed for what must have been a gala performance of some kind.

But it was the hisssssssssss that reverberated through our ears that was most disturbing.  That and the unwelcoming and aggressive atmosphere.

The men stood mesmerized by this spectacle. Unable to move, fearing for their lives when a voice cut across the hissing and suddenly there was silence.

At the top of the stairs stood the most beautiful woman they had ever seen. On either side of her were the most magnificent Cat men they could have imagined.

She seemed to glide down the stairs, her eyes fixed on the men in great interest.

“Good evening” she said.

“Welcome to Kagir Manor, I am Catfranka, I am sure you have heard of me, the Witch of Kagir?”

They were stunned when they heard her name. She was real! It wasn’t just a myth. But, now what? What would become of them now that she had them here?

The witch slowly walked around the men, one finger touching a shoulder, an arm of another. They stood silently, not sure what she was going to do next.

All the cat people were silent as well, waiting for Catfranka’s next words.

“Every 13 years I hold a Gala Ball here in the Manor and look to initiate new recruits to join me and my people. It seems this year the pickings were especially good.”

They looked at each other, each man stunned by what they heard.

Finally Michael managed to find his voice and spoke up.

“New recruits?” he whispered.

As the woman slowly turned toward him, he wondered if speaking up was a good idea. He waited, the fear building inside of him.

“Ah, Michael isn’t it?”

The thought flew through his mind, ‘She knows my name!’

“You are surprised that I know who you are? You did receive my flyer? Yes?”

Then he remembered the flyer in his letterbox a few days earlier.

                  ATTENTION MICHAEL

Saturday next

      Kagir Manor…..

……………………………………………………………….

  This story is collaboration between Jackie at To Breathe is to Write and Michael at Morpethroad.

It began when we realised our Friday Fictioneer stories

http://jlroeder.wordpress.com/2014/01/17/friday-fictioneers-jan-17-2014/

and

https://summerstommy.com/2014/01/15/friday-fictioneers-the-manor-house/

had a common ground and decided to try our hand at writing a story from this base. So this is the fruit of our labours, a lot of fun and always a pleasant exercise.

 

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