Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers – Week of 2-25-2015 – Tsunami

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Image: Dawn M Miller

As we sipped our morning coffee and contemplated the tennis match we were planning we couldn’t help but notice the tsunami approaching to our left.

I had been taking photos of the court as part of the record of our trip to Bansui Beach. We were both keen players and the location of the hotel court below our room only served to whet our appetites for a game.

Our games were always a battle with neither of us giving in to the other.

We enjoyed the closeness of our matches with the loser had to pay for lunch. As we were both misers we played with great tenacity.

But within seconds of this photo the court was gone. Swallowed up by the surging ocean.

It took ten days to get a flight home.

Mother nature had certainly aced this holiday for us.

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Creative Expressions #11: Point of view – The Tupperware Cupboard

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This week, as a learning exercise to help understand point of view, I challenge you to write the same story from two perspectives. Choose two main characters, one settings, and one mini plot. Write two stories, one for each character.

Maggie and Ben discuss the Tupperware cupboard

Maggie

It’s the Tupperware cupboard for goodness sake. Its not like I asked him to cut his throat. But anytime I ask him to do anything around here its whinge whinge whinge.

Ben thinks that as he works all day in a job that I admit has its fair share of stress, that he can come home, sit on the lounge with the kids, eat dinner and fall asleep in front of the TV.

He doesn’t realise that I have been home all day with the three little ones and our eldest has just started school.

It’s stressful and hectic round here.

I wish he could see that the running of the house is not just my job.

The Tupperware cupboard gets to be a mess because, well yes I do have too much stuff in there and when I finish with things I do have a bad habit of just throwing it back in anywhere so before long there’s plastic from arse hole to breakfast time.

I just want it kept in some order so I can find things when I need them.

I don’t think it’s too much to ask.

Ben

She’s at me again. If its not one thing its another.

She doesn’t get that I work all day in a job that’s highly stressful, I get abused by the clients and I have goals I am expected to meet each week. Its all go go go and little wonder when I come home that I want to just sit.

As it is I come in and the little kids crawl all over me and I don’t mind that as I love that they do. It’s my bonding time I say. Maggie has had all day with them.

So now I’ve been goaded into cleaning this Tupperware cupboard, which means the tedious task of finding tops and bottoms, and all the parts of sets.

There’s only so much stuff you need I would think. Why have three lettuce shakers? Six cake tins? She never even makes a cake.

She argues that her mother has so many parties that she feels obliged to buy something each time. I say it’s not your mother’s fault, you are the one who dips your hand you’re your purse each time.

I hate this job, it takes hours and I know she wont be happy because I’ll come out and say the cupboards full and not to buy any more.

I mean is that too much to ask?

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Photo Challenge #49 – Blood Money – February 24, 2015 – Molly

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Image: Pawel Kuczynski

Molly’s computer bings

She awakes from her reverie

A message.

A contract.

From Top Man.

She sits up

Takes notice.

The name’s familiar.

Toto Fungal.

Be discrete,

Be thorough.

Do your job.

Curious, Molly Google’s Toto.

As she suspected,

Top Man’s nephew.

A businessman

Father figure

Upright member of community.

A second bing

She looks

A bonus if done now.

Ask no questions just act.

Blood money she thinks

Shrugs,

A job is a job.

She packs her kit

Dresses to kill.

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Mondays Finish the Story – February 23rd, 2015 – The Letter Q

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Finish the story begins with:The old typewriter had a mind of its own.”

Which was a novelty in itself. If I typed A it typed B, C/D, E/F and so on until I hit Q. Then it took over.

ARE YOU WATCHING, LEARN TO TYPE YOU MORON.

This message appeared more than once. I did learn to type, on a different machine and the writer was impressed. At first.

But everytime I hit Q it had something to say.

You can imagine the issues I had the day I wrote: ‘Querulous questions Queeny queried quarterly.’

It took two troublesome days to get the job done. Being constantly interrupted by a sarcastic machine is very wearing.

Finally out of exasperation I built a glass case around it and to taunt it I walk past and either announce a Q word or flash a card with QUIET on it.

It vibrates a little, its agitation obvious but settles, as it knows I HAVE WON!

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Wordle #49 – February 23, 2014 – Henry Wilson

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This week’s great words to play with: Broken Visage (the face) Paper Tiger (a person, group, nation, thing that has the appearance of strength but is ineffectual) Defunct (no longer in use) Partition (a division, separation) Anabiosis (bringing back to conscious, reanimation after apparent death) Curdle Meteor Altruism (the principle or practice of unselfish concern for or devotion to the welfare of others) Twinge Bowl Draught

When I went to see my old school friend, Henry Wilson, he was as I suspected in an anabiotic state. Then again Henry on a good day was often described as death warmed up. If it was in any way possible to apply anabiosis to Henry in the hope of improving his appearance that possibility had long passed.

For the most part he was a broken man. Life it seemed had passed him by, it was as if Henry had taken his eye off the game for just a second and life had deemed him defunct of the human race.

Through some quirk of fate Henry had been happily married to Olivia for nearly fifty years. There’s was one of those marriages where the partitions of life that been erected within the first few years of their union and neither had bothered to question the viability of them.

Olivia was a bit of a Paper Tiger, all bark and not much bite. As Henry would say she had a look to curdle milk and that was enough for her to get her point across when needed. They had lived a life of blissful ignorance of each other. Olivia’s visage was always the first thing you saw when you went to visit him. She would appear at the door often with a rolling pin in her hand and a part of you always felt a twinge of dread should get on her wrong side.

Olivia did a lot of cooking and was often in the kitchen, rolling pin at the ready, her trusty mixing bowl of forty years beside her on the bench. She hated a draught and would yell at you in her strident voice to ‘Shut the bloody door, you live in a tent or something?’

I’d come this time to see Henry as he had recently discovered a meteor in the back yard and being the altruistic man he wasn’t he performed a rare bit of community service by offering the meteor to the NASA officials who stormed his door in the middle of the night demanding the meteor be returned to the authorities as such things in the wrong hands could lead to anarchy.

Henry had no idea what they were on about and gladly gave up the meteor mainly as he said to save the NASA officials from the wrath of Olivia’s rolling pin.

Despite the unusual excitement of recent events Henry maintained his anabiotic look. His misery only exacerbated by Olivia’s nagging of him to get off his arse and stop basking in altruistic notions.

As it was the intrusion by the authorities had resulted in her bowl being broken and the door damaged such that there was a draught that threatened to blow her to the Antarctic if the blasted door wasn’t fixed pronto.

Henry fixed everything by erecting a partition to block out the draught and Olivia’s consistent bellyaching.

After she’d gone back inside he looked across at me and said: ‘Paper Tiger that one. Big softy underneath all that noise.’

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Scribe’s Cave Picture Prompt #60 – The Chat

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Image: Anatomical model. Doctors were not allowed to touch women’s bodies so they would point to describe pain locations

My son its time for a chat.

A chat Father?

A chat, only a father can have with his son.

I do have questions.

Well I ‘ve brought along my lady in a box to help with any issues you may be having.

Oh good.

Now I’ll show you things to make your hair curl.

Oh Father what is that?

It’s a woman.

Are they all that gruesome?

Yes unlike your mother they are gruesome.

I’m glad mother isn’t.

So am I.

What’s that bit there?

Woman bits.

I’m shocked.

You check your own bits?

Every day.

Good boy.

It’s fun.

It’s supposed to be fun.

Do women have fun?

Sadly no.

Father what are these bits here?

Bottom bits my boy and never go there except under cover of dark.

Have you?

Only once.

Horrible was it?

Unimaginable. I’ve lived with its shame.

This chat Father has come at the right time.

It has?

The maid flutters her eyes at me.

Temptation, resist it my son resist.

Oh I will Father but sometimes it’s so hard.

Get to the bathhouse and stand under the cold water.

It will fix it?

Every time.

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Writing Prompt # 95 – Phantasmagoria – February 22, 2015

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There’s a couple next door

Young and newly married

They sing each morning

They are as most would expect

Devoted, in love

The most perfect of neighbours.

I watch as the woman

Young and beautiful

Collects herbs and produce from her garden.

Through her kitchen window

She chops and prepares

Her daily soup

It’s such a delight.

As evening descends a change occurs

Manicured fingers take on fierce talons

Youthful beauty morphs to crone like

Her pointy nose a wrinkle hook

Her teeth lengthen, around a flash of gold.

Perfect posture is bent and menacing

Her angelic voice cackles in expectation

Of nightly pleasures and sinful bounty.

The soup bubbling happily all morning

Now is agitated, steams and thickens,

The pleasant aroma no longer present

Putrid gases invade your nose

The crone and her husband apprentice

Chant in tones to chill your spine.

The substance rises as if alive

Towers triumphant sweeps the room

The crone hysterically crows

As goo and ghoul interact

A film of blue, of gold of red

As if the once soup

Is now to be bled.

Flashes of light blinding and binding

Then a darkness, a pulsing hum

The crone can be heard,

Raving feverishly incantations,

Hideous and loud

Over and over

I block my ears

Shut tight my eyes

Willing this nightmare away.

I awaken as first light appears

It is quiet, peaceful, as dawn should be.

A light is on, my neighbours have risen

Fussing about as morning requires.

I see the young woman

Harvesting her garden

Singing a song

Of expectation and magic.

She looks up at me

Nods to my presence

There’s the flash of gold

I recall from my dream?

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Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers Feb 18, 2015 – Dangerous Books

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Image: Dawn M Miller

Main Street Books was run by Mr Adolphus Miller, a bookseller of renown.

Adolphus liked old books. They contained secrets and stories from times past. He nurtured the thought that he was preserving them for future generations.

Some books were novelties of their time with cute illustrations, others a record of the social history of a time long forgotten.

Some books were out and out dangerous.

He kept them under lock and key.

These were books of magic, spells and potions that as a young man he had dabbled with much to his peril.

Before opening his store each morning he would check the bottom drawer of his desk, making sure the key he secured there was as he had left it.

He ignored its protesting gyrations, shutting and locking the drawer.

Mr Miller, knowing today was his one hundred and seventieth birthday, opened his front door again.

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SoCS February 21/15 – relative/relativity

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This week’s prompt: “relative/relativity”.

 

‘Its all relative.’ I hear it all the time.

Usually in relation to some sort of disaster in my life or someone else’s.

Then again I do have relatives. Relos we refer to them as.

There are many spread across the country and overseas.

But in terms of connecting with this prompt and Bee’s ‘Love is in da blog’ prompt I thought it best to stick to relos.

Mine are a diverse lot.

Irish boat people you might say originally, making the long ocean voyage to land in a country from which it was highly likely they would never return. It must have been a decision based on desperation and adventure along with the hope of a better life down under.

And they did just that. My grandfather was four years old at the time, later he married and had eleven children. My dad was number eight, me number two, I later married had six kids all grown into wonderful adults.

We were always taught humility which is interesting in that we all strove to do the best we could in life. Its all relative they would say in considering where we came from and where we have arrived at.

My brothers and sister have all done well in their respective lives. We are very different from each other, even though some might say we look alike.

My relos are a diverse lot as is the case with large families. We had a lost great uncle who only re-emerged last year after a cousin found him in the police files. Turns out he was a vagrant and wandered the countryside in and out of gaol in various towns.

We have had professionals, policemen, businesswomen/men, religious nuns, teachers, labourers, tradesmen, office workers, film directors, artists, singers, dancers, nurses and doctors.

The interesting thing about all this is that when we get together we are not who we are as in occupation but rather, we are family.

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Fairy Tale “Behind The Waterfall” February 20th 2015 – The Water Blossom

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Image: Urami no Taki (The Waterfall Seen From Behind)

There’s a place behind my house where the creek plunges some twenty feet down a rough rocky outcrop.

I like going there as its relaxing watching and listening to the water plunge over the rocks splashing its way into the deep pool at the bottom of the falls.

On this particular day I was there picking my way over the mossy rocks when I felt my foot slip. As I felt my balance going I also felt a hand slip into mine.

‘Must be careful,’ said the first grizzle faced water nymph.

‘Lots of dangerous places,’ said a fresh faced one.

These creatures were small knobbly water nymphs, beings who blended in so well against the landscape it was all but impossible to detect them.

They watched as I determined I had not sustained any injury before taking my hand once again and indicating I should follow them.

They stepped lightly over the rocks, careful to allow me time to negotiate the treacherous stones before disappearing behind the waterfall.

There to my surprise was a small passageway I had to crawl through in order to follow them. The passageway led me deep into the rocks and our way was lit by small iridescent beetles whose iridescence illuminated as we approached.

After some time and often crawling on my belly through the narrowest of passages I came to an opening. Beyond the opening was a beautiful garden in which all sorts of creatures could be seen.

There were more of the water nymphs sitting round a table sipping tea in silver cups and carrying on the most animated of conversations.

Behind them was a village that was humming with activity. Fairies and pixies could be seen flitting about, buying, selling, trading, bartering, spruiking their wares and the whole atmosphere was one of vibrant economic enterprise.

That evening I was invited as a guest of the annual water blossom festival.

In the village behind the waterfall was a small pond, which was fed by waters from the waterfall. On just one occasion in the year the water blossom would appear and the entire village would gather to witness the event.

At precisely eleven o’clock the village people hushed and assembled around the pond. All eyes were focused on the pond.

The pond lay still until a ripple appeared on the surface and from its depths a stem climbed into the air. The villagers stepped back as it rose into the air until it reached a point where it stopped ascending.

It then began to sway left and right until its gyrations had the top arching down to touching the water from where it had come.

Then like a crack of a whip the stem shattered. This was greeted with oohhs and ahhs of the crowd.

The group once again moved forward and from the centre of the pond a bud emerged and as it came out of the pond it opened before our eyes. From the centre the flower extended its petals across the entire circumference of the pond.

The petals were of the most exquisite colours. An outer colouring of multiple blue tones, sky blues offset with soft pastel tones and the inner ring of a dark cobalt blue against a sea of green and gold pigments descending into a centre that was of the deepest richest red.

Like everyone I stood mesmerised by the scene as the villagers as one stood and marvelled at the wonder before them.

The final delight was the perfume the blossom emitted, an aroma that sent your brain into spin, one that screamed at you to inhale all you could.

So in keeping with the villagers I stood with them as we all filled our nasal cavities with a scent I am never to forget nor my brain allow me to.

The last thing I remember was feeling my feet lift off the ground as my body floated over the pond…..

When I awoke I was lying where I remembered I had almost fallen before the adventure began.

The waterfall was doing what it always did, the rocks where as treacherous as ever, I looked around and saw no one.

I wondered if I had in fact fallen and whole experience was a dream.

Later that night as I lay in bed and relived my experience at the waterfall I couldn’t get out of my system that there was something different about me.

Then it occurred to me: the aroma of the water blossom, it lingered in the sensory part of my brain and as I felt myself drifting into sleep, my nose awoke.

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