Poetry Prompt 16 – School Days – Recollections

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School days were fool days in many ways

I was brought up in a sheltered world

Reading and writing was not something I learnt at home

But its mysteries taught to me in school.

A school beset with its own odd culture

Of nuns who ruled the universe in my reckoning

Strange women wrapped in black habits

Their faces and hands all we ever saw.

Women whom to us lacked compassion

Were mean and hard with no sense of humour

Who were quick to flog you for any indiscretion.

Only Sister Annunciata in Year Six

Resembled a human being.

In Year Five Mother DePaul a sad old cranky woman

Would belt you if you couldn’t answer a question.

The class kept tally of who received the most.

I would defy her written orders to

‘COME TO ME’.

 

Schools were factories, in one end and spat out the other

That real learning occurred was accidental I think.

The naturally smart did well

The rest of us laboured through maths

Wrote awkwardly, spelt terribly,

But we knew our times tables

Recite our catechism

And attend Mass for fear of mortal sin.

It was a time when anxiety ruled our world,

Nuns with big sticks had wicked tongues,

Where one size was made to fit all.

 

I spent twelve years in school,

In hindsight not so enjoyable,

Then forty-three more enjoyable years

On the other side trying to leave

My impressionable charges

With some good memory.

 

My life has been spent in classrooms.

Is it any wonder I don’t miss it

At all?

 

Written for: http://pookypoetry.wordpress.com/2014/05/16/poetry-prompt-16-school-days/

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Fairytale Prompt#8 – Strawberries – My Story

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In my part of the bush it was common to find wild strawberries growing beside the tracks we followed as we went about our travels to and from the village.

My mother was always telling me to stop and pick a few and bring them home, as it was common knowledge amongst our people that the strawberry had wonderful medicinal qualities.

The wild strawberry in particular was much sought after. In past times our village had been hit on several occasions by a strange malaise that left many people ill and was particularly nasty on the elderly and the very young.

Our elders had heard of plagues from passing travellers who recounted tales of terrible afflictions in villages far away across the seas. They wreaked havoc if they found their way into your village and my grandmother was always on the alert and very wary of strangers who came through the village and who reported themselves as feeling poorly.

Any who did were quickly shunted to the edges of the village and were forbidden to enter any public house or village hut.

But sometimes illness did find its way in. When grandmother was a young woman the plague as it was called struck their village. It was an insidious disease that caused a long strangulation of its victims. No one was spared, the then elders all succumbed, the very young also died quickly only the strong and healthy seemed to have any resistance to the disease that laid so many low.

My grandmother was not long married and was fearful the child she was expecting might be affected. She removed herself from the village and went into the bush to seek shelter and a place to stay while the illness raged and had its way.

She found s spot in cave not too far from the village and sat there for several days with the meagre supplies she could carry with her. Beside the cave there was a patch of strawberries and she ate them while she waited for her husband to come as he said he would when the crisis was over.

She waited four days until she saw him staggering along the track, obviously ill from the disease. She was beside herself with worry for him and helped him into the cave. She had an old rag that she used to wipe his brow and she sat for hours it seemed waiting for him to die and for the disease to take hold of her.

She had earlier carried in a heap of strawberries intent on eating them as the night drew on. He looked at her and sighed, she could see he was parched and offered him some water. She fed him a strawberry in the hope some food might rally him long enough for her to engage him in conversation.

He ate the strawberry, for they were as sweet as the best strawberries might be and fell immediately into a deep sleep. Grandmother tired out herself curled up beside him and soon feel asleep herself.

She awoke when she felt him stir beside her. She sat up quickly for he was quite agitated and she thought he must be at his end. Instead she saw him sitting up beside her, in his hand a strawberry, in his mouth another.

They looked at each other in the slowly gathering dawn and then down at the strawberries still heaped upon the floor. Gathering all they could they stood, Grandfather embraced his wife, tears streaming down his face as they suddenly knew the strawberries were the answer to their prayers.

The outcome of course was that to this day the village has not had a single instance of major illness. The villagers now days die from old age not disease.

The wild strawberries are treasured by the villagers who are all brought up on the tale of my Grandparent’s discovery of the magical qualities of the wild strawberries. Once a year on September 12th, on the anniversary of my Grandparents triumphant return to the village with strawberries for all who still survived, the villagers gather and give thanks, a ceremonial strawberry is given to the oldest villager as a sign of respect and remembrance of that day so long ago when they discovered the healing qualities of the humble wild strawberry.

My Grandparents were one hundred and twenty years old when they died, my mother will turn one hundred and ten shortly, but not before I celebrate my own eightieth birthday next week.

 

Written for: http://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2014/05/16/fairytale-prompt8/

 

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Poetry Prompt 15 – The Meaning of Life – My Son

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What’s all about daddy?

Why am I here, I’m missing John’s party?

Why does it hurt daddy when I breathe?

Why am I plugged in, always in this bed?

 

He asks me these questions,

Each day so it seems

And I have not many answers

Other than, this my son is how it’s for you.

 

Everyday I come and watch you lie there

I see the print out from the night before

My heart breaks a little; as you head further to the red

That’s all I see, as you fade slowly away.

 

You didn’t deserve nor asked for this,

Its how you are, we do all that we can

I have no answers other than it’s who you are

And I see you nod, as if those words suffice.

 

You watch all the news; I’ve seen you cry

Over the plight of some child, some lost neglected soul

You say can I help with that appeal for that child?

I’ll write them a letter, give away all my cash.

 

I see you rally despite all your pain

Reach out with joy when I come around

Your spirit lifts and sustains me each day

I am so proud my son; you are the boy that you are.

 

The answer I come to when I think of you

Is to be who you are, never someone you’re not

We can only be the people we are,

Loving and cherishing the ones we hold dear.

 

You my son touch the lives of so many

I see it each day; by the way you behave,

Never a cross word, compliant and patient

You have so much to give; you bring joy to my heart.

 

But I know a day will come to soon

When the machines will not be enough for you

And you’ll slip quietly away, as I hold your hand

I do know you’ll never, leave with a fuss.

 

You are what life is all about

Caring and compassionate, the best you can be

You are my son, your courage astounds me

I know that always, you’ll live in my heart.

 

Written for : http://pookypoetry.wordpress.com/2014/05/15/poetry-prompt-15-the-meaning-of-life/

 

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Poetry Prompt 14 – Describe a Smell – My Cat

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Phew, my goodness my face is all red,

I am sorry to say I think something’s dead.

 

I have not been so nasally affronted

My nose feels like its just been punted.

 

The aroma is not something to speak to

As I fear it may be stuck to my shoe.

 

I sense it as I round my street

Stronger it grows with each step of my feet.

 

It reminds me that mess on the road

The one when the car ran over the toad.

 

The smell stayed around for days

We pretended it was a form of malaise.

 

But this smell I fear is very unique

Too hard for me to guess or critique

 

I fear the worst as I look you see

On stepping closer to number three.

 

Overwhelming and taking my breath away

I am sure I put the cat out today.

 

She’s old and not long for this world

I will fear to look if her tails all curled.

 

I see Mr Jones at Number one

Looking as though something’s been done

 

There’s movement at Ben’s at number seven

I hear the poor old coot’s gone to heaven

 

So what a relief as I open my door

Collect the mail from the vinyl floor

 

I look around to find my cat

But she’s not there upon her mat

 

Then again there’s that smell once more

Oh no I gasp, that’s her on the floor.

 

Oh kitty you don’t smell to good at all

I’ll bury you now get you out of the hall.

 

I’d best get a shovel and my old rusty spade

Bury you next to Rover and Kade.

 

It’s been a sad old day for me

These offensive smells have put me at sea.

 

Fumigate, scrub give an all over clean,

My house now sparkles, no smells obscene.

 

Written for: http://pookypoetry.wordpress.com/2014/05/14/poetry-prompt-14-describe-a-smell/

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Poetics: Those Pesky Questions of Identity – The Man I Am

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I am a man, father, friend, lover

I could be superman, Mr Universe,

Anyone I choose in this space

But those who know me would say liar lair pants on fire.

As I age I find I am confronted by the prefix ex.

Ex–husband, ex-teacher, ex-lover

My ex factor is no wow factor.

I love my amazing children

They guard and protect me

Should they perceive a threat

They rally round me

Hackles raised, in my defence.

I am lucky they love me

My adult children, caring, ever thoughtful

For my happiness.

But when all is said and done

I can only be me,

A man unlike other men

A man of words and action

Unique

A man of humour and insight

A man I am happy spending my days with.

 

Written for: http://dversepoets.com/2014/05/13/poetics-those-pesky-questions-of-identity/

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Poetry Prompt 13 – No Punctuation – discourse on love

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im asking you a question is this

or that

or something else

what you mean

one day not far from here in a little green

field

there will

sit a

blue box

with a painted

outside

that will say

please sir if you can

assist id appreciate it as

i have no visible signs of

help in this dog eat dog world

so if you

can

help that would be nice

if you call me at onehindredsixfoureightteheleven

ill get back to you in no time

in your case

a probably long

time as

I have been

known to

be a right

slacker

with me grammar and me

spellin isnt so good neither

oh #@#$%$#^&%$^$& and *&^$$%*$@%$@%

so don’t wait up

i

may be a

while

or even longer as this

poems takin

me an

eternity to

write

 

Written for: http://pookypoetry.wordpress.com/2014/05/13/poetry-prompt-13-no-punctuation/

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Photo Challenge #8 “War Paint” – No Painted Maypole

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Art work by Chiara Fersinis

I have lived in your shadow so long

You have taken much from me

My soul, my being, my heart

You have left me shaking and irresolute.

 

But enough is enough; no more can you call me

‘Stupid, dumb, irrational, ignorant,

You’re a woman so what would you know

Get back where you belong.’

 

I have seen through your poison

Your barbs will no longer take hold

I am a woman to be reckoned with

Preparing myself for my greatest battle.

 

Do not be confused by this new me

I am no painted maypole, no Jezebel,

What you will see is the real me, liberated

Set free from your yoke of oppression.

 

I am a woman of means, of purpose

I will rise above your world of pettiness

I will be used nor abused any longer

For my sights are on a higher target.

 

You will not stop me; I will not be broken

You will not reduce me again to a cowering mess,

I will stand up as never before

Call you for what you really are, nothing!

 

I know you will doubt my resolve

Ridicule my intention as silly woman’s talk.

In the weeks to come, you will settle again

Into your lonely pathetic life.

 

The pitiful human you are, I leave behind

To wallow in the mire of your own existence

While I rise triumphant, my colours raised

The resilient woman you feared I would become.

 

Written for: http://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2014/05/13/photo-challenge-8-war-paint/

 

 

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Poetry Prompt 12 – Light and Dark – Who am I?

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I live in a world of extremes

Light and dark

Up and down

In and out

Hit or be hit

Walk, don’t walk.

My neighbour bashes his wife

His wife baths his swollen fists.

My children tell me they love me

Then go off and steal.

My wife for better or worse

Is having an affair with the butcher.

And me?

I am my own separate paradox

A part time weekend axe murderer

A funeral celebrant by day.

I offer solace to the grieving

And grieving to the solaced.

Is it any wonder I question

On a daily basis I find

Just who am I, and who am I not?

 

Written for: http://pookypoetry.wordpress.com/2014/05/12/poetry-prompt-12-light-and-dark/

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Wordle #8 – Tackas Saves His Girl

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I hadn’t see Tackas for some months but I heard him before I saw him.

It was clear he was agitated and as he made his way to the bar I could sense a change in him.

Clancy ya young feck

Tackas!

Been a lifetime since I laid eyes on ya what the feck have ya been up to?

Oh just hanging about. You?

 

Oh Clancy me dear friend I’m bin up to a lot I can tell ya. Do you want the good news or the feckin’ bad news?

You have both?

I do and I’m feckin’ dying to tell ya both.

Well the good news first.

The good news is there’s no bad news. And I’m in love.

Really?

Yes and don’t be lookin’ so feckin’ surprised now.

I am Tackas but I’m happy for ya. What’s her name and tell me all about her.

Well her name is Jakelynn. She’s a palliative care nurse and as light and breezy as a blue wren I can be tellin’ ya.

You mean her names Jacquelyn.

No ya dumb feck, its Jakelynn.

That’s a weird name you sure you got it right?

Course I got the feck right, it’s not her fault that’s her name now is it?

I guess not.

Anyway I call her Jake saves a lot of bother. Now what was I saying oh yes now ya see she’s jus the most supernal girl I’ve ever met, I’ve been floating around like in ecstasy for weeks now.

Supernal?

Supernal. Heavenly like an angel. Clancy sometimes you disappoint me, your as thick as all feck, everyone knows supernal.

Never heard of it.

You know Clancy if ya stuck with the wordle’s you’d know a feck more than you do now, as it is ya know feck all.

Into the wordle’s again?

I am I loves a good wordle, I can feel it warming me feckin’ blood when I looks at ‘em twelve words.

Yeah ok, we’ve had this conversation before, so how did the two of you meet?

Well that’s the ting Clancy, tis a perplexing ting you know. You aren’t gonna believe it when I tells ya but I was out at the lake and I was wandering along watching where I was stepping cause there’s a lot of that slippery moss along the waters edge, when I hears the scream, and I looks over and its herself, neck deep in the water, as she’d slipped on the moss and now was suffering a right old drenching. So I fished her out and helped her dry out I did.

You helped her dry out? That’s very chivalrous of you.

It was and I’ll spare ya the feckin’ graphic details for I know ya a sensitive artistic type are you not? So only to say we got a long well, so well she’s coming to stay for the weekend.

That’s wonderful Tackas. I hope you have a great weekend.

So the feck do I she owes me the hundred dollars it cost me to buy her dry clothes.

Written for: http://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2014/05/12/wordle-8/

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Prompt 55 “Slowly Dawning Horror” On Viewing ‘The Exorcist’

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Its dark now

The house is silent

Save for the creaking of the floor

The room, the bed, the sheets, me

Seemingly everything is making noises

They don’t normally make.

To make matters worse

For the first time ever

My parents are away for the weekend.

Normally I am fine in the dark

But tonight I am on edge.

Last night I took my girlfriend

To the movies, The Exorcist.

It terrified me; I have been trembling ever since,

I even smashed her hand at one stage

Against the arm rest as I moved to cover my eyes

Apologies were short lived as the next

Even more confronting scene followed

Heads swivelling, projectile green vomit

Were bad enough

But it was the sound, the voices,

That scared me the most,

Unnatural sounds from unnatural beings.

Should my bed so much as move as a fraction

I am out of here!

A sleepless night, dawn welcomed with open arms.

Later I read the novel

Enjoyed it as I took in the scenes that frightened me

Given time to digest them, not visually confronted.

My naivety in seeing the film

Thinking at age twenty

What a man of the world I was

Was horribly rewarded.

 

Written for: http://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2014/05/11/prompt-55-slowly-dawning-horror/

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