Photo Challenge #22 “Seesaw”

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You flit you know

From one spot to another

Like emotions stuck on the see saw of life

You never flutter

That’s too much to ask for

Too predictable you might say.

So you flit interminably

While those behind struggle

With keeping up

Hanging on to your intangibleness.

You never look behind do you?

The flotsam and jetsam of life

Left floundering in your wake

Collateral damage I once heard you say.

Heads shake some even roll

As you bluster your way ahead

Pleasant to some vicious to others

The fools you say who don’t see your way

Those with the audacity to question

Even query your motives.

The arse lickers of course congregate

Singing in chorus

Harmonious praise to the most high

With little acumen they accept your grossness

Their blind faith like some religious cult.

With the faithful gathered around you

I watch as you bask in their approval

As if some saviour was in their presence

Only to find the knives you sink

Protrude even from the backs of followers.

Your day will come I am sure

The ups and downs you orchestrate

Will one day come to an end

The down will not facilitate the up

The up only further to fall.

When you do, whom do you expect

Will be there to pick you up?

Me?

In your dreams my dear.

I’m happy on the big swing.

 

Written for: http://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2014/08/19/photo-challenge-22-seesaw-2/

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27 Responses to Photo Challenge #22 “Seesaw”

  1. Oh wow this has some venom, powerful emotions and vivid character portrait!

  2. Yves said what I was going too, so I shall pout, loved the venom Michael, very believable.

  3. adameverhard's avatar adameverhard says:

    Now where do you know my ex from? 😉
    I loved this–it has teeth!

  4. JackieP's avatar JackieP says:

    My goodness. Spiteful thing for sure. I’d be happier on the big swing too. 😉

  5. arushiahuja's avatar arushiahuja says:

    powerful … a vicious attack on someone! its nicely done!

  6. lifelessons's avatar grieflessons says:

    Nothing like a little vitriol to prime the muse! I have one or two of these myself. Judy

  7. lifelessons's avatar grieflessons says:

    Oops–sorry. Meant to say I enjoyed yours! Judy

  8. RoSy's avatar RoSy says:

    I much prefer the swing too. 🙂

  9. I enjoyed this read, Michael, and the two last lines are epic!

  10. taleweavering's avatar phylor says:

    I like the big swing, too. A big porch swing on a summer evening (if the bugs are at bay) with lightening bugs and stars. Forget the justifiable venom for an hour or two.

  11. Linda Vernon's avatar Linda Vernon says:

    Very very nicely done! People like that are definitely more trouble than they’re worth!

  12. indigowildchild55's avatar Pat says:

    Brilliantly powerful with a wonderful rhythm that builds in speed, much like the days of playing on a see-saw, as children, but with deliciously well versed adult content. Not in a bad or offensive way, mind.

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