Poetry Prompt 61 – Holiday – Just Us






Just us.


We went to the island

We went alone

No one to bother us

A week of relaxation

Just us.


Sleeping in

Spa baths

Exotic foods

Lounging by the pool

Just us.





Ready again

Just us.





No tangles

Just us.

Written for: http://pookypoetry.wordpress.com/2014/06/30/poetry-prompt-61-holiday/

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25 Responses to Poetry Prompt 61 – Holiday – Just Us

  1. mtanub says:

    I love this. It’s so different to what I wrote about a holiday. The funs and things we look forward to.

  2. Tangles would be good wouldn’t they ..wink wink

  3. Lyn says:

    Where is this island? I want to go!!

  4. oooh ilike the tingles x

  5. mandy says:

    Sounds perfect!

  6. PookyH says:

    Sounds perfect.

    I love ‘tea, tingles, no tamgles’ 🙂

  7. JackieP says:

    Now that’s my kind of holiday! Sea, sand, tingles, coffee…. yes, I could get behind that,or in that, or whatever. Really nice holiday you took us on Michael.

  8. wbdeejay says:

    Idyllic. Nice to think about in contrast to the current winter experience.

  9. RoSy says:

    I feel the romance in your heart with this & other recent poems. LOVE!
    This reminds me of my 10th year anniversary. We splurged & went to Fiji. We had a wonderful time.

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