Poetics: Tree poetry – My Life as a Lemon Scented Gum

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Good grief but its hot

My leaves are a canopy

For you not me

Where’s mine?

It’s a drag of a life you know

I’m at nature’s whim

And believe me there’s an abundance of them.

There’s the wind,

Blows the life out of me,

Not to mention rudely rips bits off.

Then there’s rain, I’m forever wet,

The cold, a frost does none of us any good.

I see you gather around my trunk,

Impressive isn’t it, taken several hundred years,

Size does matter you know.

I try to interact; I’m pleasant most days

My shade is one way

The other well it’s a tad embarrassing

“Sorry!” I call

As a seed pod lands unceremoniously in your soup,

On your head, opps, didn’t see you there.

I’m always here so it seems,

I see generation’s come and go

My longevity makes me wonder

Why you insist on poisoning my air?

After all if it wasn’t for me

What might you be breathing?

Written for: http://dversepoets.com/2014/05/06/tree-poetry/

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31 Responses to Poetics: Tree poetry – My Life as a Lemon Scented Gum

  1. brian miller's avatar brian miller says:

    so true in what they provide…our very life giving air…and yet we pollute it
    and pump our chemicals into it…size does matter…smiles…
    i want to go see the redwoods some time…the huge ancient trees

    • Yes I have seen those trees Brian very impressive indeed. To any self respecting tree size makes a difference to withstanding the elements. Thanks for your comment Brian. Have a good evening.

  2. OH my goodness, I love this! What wonderful perspective. You made me smile wide with this little write. Love the quotes. ” OOps…”, “sorry”! lol.

  3. JackieP's avatar JackieP says:

    Really good Michael, all though I think some trees are pranksters. Like in the fall, right after you rake all their leaves up and you think they have no more to drop. You turn around and the grass is covered again! I think I hear them chuckle lol

  4. RoSy's avatar RoSy says:

    Oh – How I love thee – tree! 😉

  5. lynn__'s avatar lynndiane says:

    You certainly captured the trees’ perspective with humor, grace, and thoughtfulness – wonderful poem!

  6. claudia's avatar claudia says:

    yes – what can we breathe when they’re gone and is there a better place than under a huge tree… we should take better care of them… i like how you made him talk

  7. vandana's avatar vandana says:

    Lovely poem and its time we wake up from our slumber and respect nature.

  8. Gabriella's avatar Gabriella says:

    Very good poem, Michael. I enjoyed the everyday tone of this tree’s complain. Powerful closing lines.

  9. Ah you made me smile, I do,love when you give ‘objects’ a personality and voice, you do it so well. Size does matter… snort 😉

  10. thenewmoody's avatar Madhura says:

    Ah this is a fun poem! The tree does have a sense of humor.. you made me chuckle… lovely poem! 🙂

  11. Sumana Roy's avatar Sumana Roy says:

    Enjoyed each and every word and the wit 🙂

  12. Mary's avatar Mary says:

    You have really got inside the mind of a tree, Michael. Very original presentation. So very true that without trees what would we breathe…..sigh….we need to stop poisoning the air.

  13. The monologue form works so well here.. and I must say I laughed at the seed-pods.. despite the seriousness of the rest of the poem…

  14. kelly's avatar kelly says:

    Ha, yes, you have it all so right. I love the truth you wove behind the bits of humor.

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