Poetics – Looking for Treasure – My Clock

2014-04-09 08.42.07

Dated 1903, great grandparents

Leaving the country

One-time graziers.

Aging they moved to the coast

Lived in my house.

 

A mystery as inscribed on the plaque

Why were the people grateful

In presenting this to them?

A job for discovery.

Not much is known about them

They cared for a grandson

Had four daughters

No family name carried on from them.

 

Their grave is nearby,

A lasting monument

They must have had money.

Their daughters built houses after their deaths.

Today the clock resides in my lounge room,

Thankfully it doesn’t work.

It chimes every fifteen minutes

I recall it as a child

Chiming in the middle of the night.

But it stands as a reminder

Of family long gone

But of significance, it can’t have been cheap.

My mother had it restored,

Each evening we turned the key

Kept the pendulum swinging

The chimes chiming.

I like having it,

One day I’ll unearth its origins.

 

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34 Responses to Poetics – Looking for Treasure – My Clock

  1. brian miller's avatar brian miller says:

    smiles. love that moment of turning the key together
    there was a really cool grandfather clock in my grandparents
    house…we used to play at the foot of it…interesting the bit
    of mystery behind this too.

  2. That IS a treasure with so much family history. My grandma told me lots of stories and now I wish i had written them all down for one forgets and almost everyone from those days has died….do track down that history, if you can.

  3. Ayala's avatar Ayala says:

    Nice storytelling.

  4. Mary's avatar Mary says:

    What a beautiful clock. I smiled when you said, “Thankfully it doesn’t work” as I do imagine it would be difficult to listen to it chime every fifteen minutes. It really would be nice to know its history though, its significance. I do hope you find out its story.

  5. charleenm's avatar charleenm says:

    Every time it chimes it is trying to say, “remember me!”

  6. Oh, you’ve got to find out about it. And write another poem to let us know. I’ve lived with a chiming clock. Let me tell you, as an insomniac–it’s not fun!

  7. JackieP's avatar JackieP says:

    Beautiful clock Michael. You will indeed have to tell us all what you find out about it. I love a good mystery.

  8. RoSy's avatar RoSy says:

    I enjoy the nostalgic feel of family stories told. And – this one has a touch of mystery that has me wondering more about the story.

  9. lupitaeydetucker's avatar lupitatucker says:

    Keep the pendulum swinging … That one line speaks volumes. I hope you can find out more about it.

  10. billgncs's avatar billgncs says:

    funny how fragile and incomplete our knowledge of the past is. Good luck hunting.

  11. I like the mystery here… When part of the history’s unknown. and still a totally new history created. A clock chiming every 15 minutes would take some getting used to

  12. Kathy Reed's avatar kkkkaty1 says:

    Oh my what a treasure that is…especially the memory of winding the clock…I have one I do that with with my grandkids…love this.

  13. Gabriella's avatar Gabriella says:

    Nice one, Michael! I enjoyed the bit of mystery around your lovely clock. One of my grand aunts had a big grandfather clock which chimed in the middle of the night. As a child it frightened me to hear the tune of Big Ben. To this day, I am not fond of chiming clocks.

  14. shanyns's avatar shanyns says:

    A treasure, with a mystery of history – love this piece and the stories in it. Well done!

  15. Ah, family mysteries, aren’t they sometimes the most puzzling? Something chimed (excuse the pun) with your lines about their family name not being carried on. This saddens me, when names get lost. I don’t have my dad’s surname, neither does my sister – he had no sons. The end of the line…
    Careful winding of clocks – oh I remember that with my first watch, is it even possible to get a solely clockwork timepiece, any more?
    The clock is so impressive – I hope you do find out the origins, one day. A beautiful, mysterious heirloom indeed!

    • Thanks Freya it is one I hope to sort out in time. Names not carried on is what happens in families though I know of one family who thought their first child would be there only child so the family name became part of their daughters name. Two years later they had a boy.

  16. Barry's avatar Barry says:

    So not just a treasure, but also an artifact with historical and mysterious connotations. I love the way your poem uncovers the Clark’s origin in patient, carefully crafted layers, almost like an archeological dig. I wish you luck in discovering the history of this treasure.

  17. That presents an intriguing mystery, Michael. I hope you’ll write more about what you discover.

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