Poem 86

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I watch you open your eyes

You smile

Move closer.

Your arm encircles me,

A kiss so tender

To melt my heart.

Your fingers stroke my hair.

There is no reason for words

We speak an unspoken language

Of lovers, joy and commitment.

In the freshness of the morning

We play, gently, savouring every second

Wishing this moment

To never end.

 

 

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60 Responses to Poem 86

  1. Aww this IS lovely, Michael:)

  2. Aww the unspoken language of love. Nice Mr.G šŸ™‚

  3. Lyn's avatar Lyn says:

    You write beautiful poetry, Michael.

  4. Miss Lou's avatar Miss Lou says:

    Beautiful imagery created from these words Michael. I watched the Notebook the other night and my mind instantaneously flew back to those moments where they were reunited and everything at once seemed perfect and right in the world.

    #EarthIsCrammedWithHeaven

    ML
    x

    • Thank you Lou, I have written a few around this theme, I like the idea of waking with a lover.
      The movie you mention is a oldie but a good one, sad as I remember. I am glad you found a connection with this poem. Good see you again.

      • Miss Lou's avatar Miss Lou says:

        I also relate to the feeling you have Michael – fondness of the idea of waking with a lover.

        Albeit I’ve only just recovered from the last relationship I was in (that unreasonably was never really defined) and Oh what a mess it created in my heart and mind.

        Might pay to mention I stop communicating with this man in march of 2009 (Looks at calendar… so that would be the LONGEST recovery in.. say.. well FOREVER)

        I may well live on to be a spinster… lol *snorks*

        *reminds myself I’m only 35*

      • Relationships are hard work, having failed twice. I believe recovery can take a long time. I think I’ve gone a little longer than you, 2007. Single life does have its benefits, you play whatever music you like as loud as you like. But waking up alone is not what any of us desires. You are still young, your knight nay be just around the corner, you never know.

      • Miss Lou's avatar Miss Lou says:

        *nods* Perhaps.

        Right now, my priority is ensuring the children have a stable, well grounded upbringing. Being 7 and 9 years old, they are young yet coming into themselves and are so very very smart.

        As a child of a single mother, I myself constantly reflect on my experiences with the men my mother involved herself with (Often Co Dependent Relationships) and have consciously chosen to not involve myself with any romantically until I am confident of the influence they would have in my both my life as well as that of the children.

        I’m not sure if that’s how it should be done, though that’s how I’ve decided to do it šŸ™‚ lol

      • You have made good choices Lou, your children are your life, your own experiences serve to remind you of what priorities you want for them and you. Go do your thing, be happy at what you see you are giving your kids. They will thank you and if they are smart they need opportunity to exercise their intelligence. I worked in a school for gifted and talented kids, they are amazing places and the kids support one another. You sound like you have a clear direction for your children. You are a long way ahead of those who don’t.

      • Miss Lou's avatar Miss Lou says:

        *beaming smiles*

        Thank you for the words of affirmation and encouragement Michael.

      • It’s not easy on your own Lou, not easy in a dysfunctional marriage either, but somehow my kids have turned out ok. You can only do what you believe is right for your family, the rest takes care of itself. Keep doing what you are doing…..you’ll be ok.

      • Miss Lou's avatar Miss Lou says:

        P.s: Playing whatever music you like, when you like is definitely a Perk.. lol

      • Works everyday for me.

      • Miss Lou's avatar Miss Lou says:

        Works mostly for me, especially when the children grab the hairbrush and start singing Taylor Swift tunes.

      • Yes well my kids have all but one left and have their own families and my son tolerates my music tastes.

      • I should point out that your children’s musical tastes are a bit like the friends they choose, you don’t have a lot of say in it.

      • Miss Lou's avatar Miss Lou says:

        But I can always lock them in their rooms, and deadbolt the doors, not providing keys?

        #QuestionableParentingTechniques

      • Yeah true, but is it working for you? If they have their music with them they just play it LOUDER!!!!

      • Miss Lou's avatar Miss Lou says:

        LOL… I was talking about preventing them seeing #NotSoAppripriatelyBehavingFriends

        Right now, I get the say – since they are 7 and 9, but I’m starting to consider ways to install ground breaking state of the art security to stop them climbing out their windows or sneaking out after dark.

        #MicroChip and #AnkleBracelets

        lol

      • Yeah yeah yeah, good luck on that one.
        I thought I had a handle on my kids as they grew up.
        In recent years they have delighted in telling me about what they actually did, like climbing out the window in the middle of the night…..had I known then I would have been beside myself.

      • The other way to look at it is to realise that in bringing up your children you are imparting values into them that will direct them to the friends they most want to be with. its a bit like the like minded theory. You’ll be fine.

      • Miss Lou's avatar Miss Lou says:

        Oh and thank you for the welcome back šŸ™‚ I don’t know why I don’t try harder to be here more often, I really enjoy my time when I get here, life just keeps on getting in the way!!

        #Rudeness

      • That’s the thing about life it has a habit of getting in the way, and we have to live it.

  5. Alastair's avatar Al says:

    Awesome and rejuvinating

  6. gimpet's avatar gimpet says:

    This makes me sad and ache a little. My partner hates to be touched in the morning. He is a night person only. I often wish that I could have this. Being in a relationship doesn’t mean that ones’ needs will be met.

    • Dear gimpet, I hear what you are saying it is sad to be denied what you crave, and it is true a relationship doesn’t mean anyone notices you any more than they might a stranger in the street. A relationship can be the loneliest of places to be.

  7. Very beautiful!! šŸ™‚ šŸ™‚

  8. This is beautiful. True intimacy comes with moments like these we share. I will be getting your post from now on. You were set to off in my reader. šŸ™‚

  9. Yes I’m in the USA. I’m usually in bed by 6 I was late today. Are you in Australia? I’m almost all I became disabled too young. So I went bad before my expiration date. šŸ™‚

  10. I’m doing good. I’m really blessed. I was on oxygen. I haven’t need it for three years. I need to lose 100 pounds. I gained while on steroids and stopping smoking. Easy to put on and hard to take off. My cousin moved back to the States 6 months ago. He lived in St. Ann I think. He worked on those big construction trucks. Company moved him back. He loved Australia.

  11. RoSy's avatar RoSy says:

    Lovely…The romance in your words has me oohn’ & ahhn’ šŸ™‚

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