Music Friday Prompt #4 “Queen of the Night” from The Magic Flute by Mozart – The Girl and The Boy

This week we are asked to use Mozart’s ‘Queen of the Night’s ‘aria from “The Magic Flute” as the basis for a piece of writing.

The girl looked up from her screen

She’d written another thousand words

Once again tears streamed down her face.

She was, as always, writing about suffering

Her suffering

Her pain

Her lose of dignity

The theft of her childhood

The annihilation of her self.

The cause was too great to give up on

There were others out there she knew

Like her, tormented by their pasts,

Hanging onto to her words

As they drew strength and courage

To the revelations they would make

About pasts wracked with traumas

Leaving them shells of what might have been.

Across an ocean far far away

A boy looked up from his screen

What he read triggered the worst of thoughts

Accusations of inadequacies‘You’re no good, no use, buy a cat.’

He wanted to sink back into the hole he lived in

Where it was safe and where no one saw him.

But out there he knew was hope.

The girl wrote more, she needed to get her story out

Away from the shadows of her past,

Awaiting that cathartic moment of cleansing.

Despite her flaws she too had hope.

One of her mysteries in life was love

How could someone as damaged and unworthy as she

Be the source of another’s affection.

Was it a trick she asked herself?

Is this just fantasy?

To every turn, she made to distance herself

Secure every exit, slam every window

But the door to her heart remained ajar,

Awakened from enforced hibernation

One she thought permanent

It leapt at the possibility of feeling again.

The boy reflected and thought it’s impossible

I am so flawed, so damaged, so ruined

Yet there is hope where there should be none.

He cried as he contemplated his present place

Could she love him regardless of such a grotesque blemish?

Where others had scorned him

Ridiculed his version of love

She reached out, held his hand

Took him to her breast and held him tight.

Tremble not she called to him

We have both suffered the outrageous

Our innocence shattered

Our hopes dashed.

Our awakening is frightening

Stirred are long forgotten urges

Ready to be set free

Ready to be set free.

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Tale Weaver #26: inuksuk – Home

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Image: Vancouver, British Columbia Winter Games, 2010

This week we are asked to weave a tale using the Inuit word ‘inuksuk’ as the basis for our tale. In Inuit (and other Artic Circle languages), inuksuk* translates into “something which acts for or performs the function of a person.” Traditionally, for example, inuksuk indicated a point of reference, travel route, or spiritual place.

As he closed his eyes that last time he felt the hand softly enclose on his own.

He was lifted from where he lay and led out of the room.

Down a short passage he looked to his left and saw a room in which his drug addled parents lay about, children in distress, himself a babe in dirty nappy, ignored as was to be his lot in life.

A little further another room, this time a schoolroom. He saw himself in the corner, an object of ridicule, the teacher berating him for his lack of everything.

Round a corner a place he recognised. The prison. His home away from home. How much of his life had been wasted in those places? But strangely he felt a safety in the enclosed walls, the regimented life and the same predictability of life.

All the while as he walked along his hand was held, it was warm and he felt an odd sensation, as if the hand belonged to him, as if he was going somewhere that would be ok.

At no time did he say to himself he should resist. As he pasted the multiple rooms each containing some aspect of his miserable life the words he heard as a young man echoed in his mind. “ This poor bastard hasn’t got a chance in life. From the moment of birth he has been up against it.”

In reflection he now understood what that meant.

He was born with nothing and in life he had achieved nothing. Unless you counted the illegitimate children who littered the landscapes of the places he had frequented.

At the end of his life he had surrendered to the ravages of time. To the effects of over indulgence, which is what one, did to shut out the pain of living.

Now he was being led somewhere and he took a moment to look ahead, to see who it was that was leading him.

The hand that held him was attached to a tall and powerful man, in white, long flowing hair, whose focus was on the immediate.

He thought he called to him but no words came out.

He even tried pulling his hand away but there was no letting go.

Eventually they stopped.

The man holding his hand turned to him smiled and mouthed the word ‘Home’.

When the man let go of his hand he suddenly felt alive, as if his soul had been reinvigorated.

He stepped forward, ahead of him lay what his heart had so long craved……..love.

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Photo Challenge #73, Crowned, August 11, 2015 – Inclines with no Declines

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Image: – Natalia Drepina

Today I breathed

The down is not so rapid

The up not so harrowing

There’s a chance of progress

The stream’s not flowing so swiftly

Making headway is possible

A step at a time

Day by day.

The crown you wear is an ill fit

Thrust upon you rather than placed.

On your shoulders are the years of trial

Burdens unspeakable,

Words not uttered

For from within the darkness

Monsters and demons lurk.

At days end your mantle weighs heavily

You collapse into slumber

Awakening in darkest terror

Your prince stands at your side

Extends his hand,

You hesitate to reach out

His gesture filled with

A fear of its own.

But his smile reassures

You find a smooth path

With inclines never declines.

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FFfAW-Week of 08-11-2015 – Manis

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Manis looked at me and I at her.

This would be our tenth castle and I was fed up with castles.

The previous excursion to take in the Castle of Vitorian had resulted in a rude awakening for us.

At the door was a sign advising that on certain days beginning with a T the castle ghost could be seen marauding the corridors.

Manis loved ghosts; She had an affinity with them and was eager to engage with this one.

But this was no ordinary ghost. He didn’t scream, clank chains, pop out at you but rather as you walked along you had this eerie sense of someone behind you, then beside you then in front of you then Manis screamed, her skirt had been lifted, her hair touched and then she froze as cold clammy hands grasped her neck.

At the front door of this tenth castle was a sign, ‘Beware the Castle Ghost’ with tally marks numbering fifty.

Still recovering we looked at each other and…..Nah!

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Mondays Finish the Story – August 10th, 2015 – Jez

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Finish the story begins with:  “Where did they go?”

Jez looked sheepishly around. Not a sound. Not a sight of….. But he knew what he had seen.

They were here one second and gone the next.

Not an apparition. He was sure of that. He didn’t think you made eye contact with apparitions.

He searched among the ruins for some sign that might validate his sense of bordering upon encroaching insanity. He had this feeling of intense anxiety, like he had something to prove and prove it he would. He could sense them, just out of sight, out of reach, teasing him as they had this past day and a half.

In his mind he could hear them tittering to themselves as they led him on this merry chase. He began to wonder if their plan was to wear him down to a state of exhaustion and then feast upon him as they had Carson, his one time offsider.

 

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Wordle #73 “August 10, 2015″ Arthurius

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This week’s words: Hurry Clumsy Deliverance Cask Evade Notch Lofty Galaxy Chamois (an agile, goat-like antelope; a soft, pliable leather from any of various skins dressed with oil, especially fish oil, originally prepared from the skin of the chamois.) Uninvited Apple-chaser (Someone willing to do anything, no matter how degrading, for any amount of money; named for the “road apples” left behind by horses) Jeer

In a galaxy, just south of the lost galaxy of apple chasers lived a people who believed they could be anything and do anything…. who were in such a hurry to prove their versatility that they did in fact hurry their own extinction.

This was in fact such a shame because history has since proved most of their theories to be complete nonsense as they tended to evade the suggestion that survival was paramount to any theory that hinted at possible if not probable annihilation.

History records them, as a clumsy folk with lofty ideas for the survival of their species, which as time was to prove, was tenuous at best.

Their theory that a notch in time saves ten was to prove to be as spurious an idea as there ever was. Arthurius the chamois maker had put forward the idea that using a chamois saved the work of ten. But the question always was, ten what? He maintained his theory worked and even on his deathbed despite the jeers of those who had debunked his theory stuck to his belief that his humble chamois was the answer to the work issues of all who bothered to take up one and put it to some useful purpose.

Arthurius also made casks; the ones he made from the leather of the oily fish of Catsurius were not much a hit as they had a tendency to collapse. Arthurius demonstrated their durability during the annual deliverance parade when he successfully used six casks filled with the blood of the agile goat-like antelope, to hold up the queen of the parades chariot.

It was the uncanny appearance that brought him all undone. The queen a clumsy girl on a good day, had tripped on the first cask, bumped her head on the second cask, punctured the third with her tiara this causing a cascade of blood and other bits equally disgusting, which then caused the whole chariot to lean to one side, catching a notch in the roadway, and there fore initiating the uninvited jeers of all concerned who watched on incredulously at the farcical spectacle unfolding before them.

Much to Arthurius’ disgust no amount of chamois or apple chasing was going to clean up this mess.

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Tale Weaver # 25 – When the Wicked Witch Visits – Miss Marble

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Image © Rose’s Garden, used with permission

This week’s task is to weave a tale in which the wicked witch comes to visit.

The knock on the door was one of those that intimated immediately a sense of urgency in me to answer it.

I opened the door and there stood Miss Marble my aging neighbour.

In her hand she held a half-cup measure.

‘Could I borrow a half cup of sugar dear,’ she asked.

I looked once again at her hand. Her fingers were long and talon like, her nails long and curved. It was rare to see her out of her house and for the most part I considered her so reclusive as to think sometimes she wasn’t there at all.

Today she appeared at my door and I was taken aback. Her long black dress did its best to hide her aging form; her feet were bare and like her hands gave more the appearance of claws than feet.

She looked at you in the most inquisitive of ways and you thought her toothless face grotesque until she smiled and you saw a row of impeccable white teeth.

She was a lady of many aspects.

I invited her in and she wandered in behind me. I turned to see her looking at the photos on the mantelpiece.

‘Ah,’ she exclaimed. “I recall your grandparents, lovely people, we had many a quiet evening on my veranda watching the evening sunset.’

To me Miss Marble looked about 60 and any reference to my grandparents suggested she was a greater age than her looks betrayed.

I quickly gathered some sugar for her as her presence did alarm me. I was beginning to think she wanted a little more than sugar, perhaps some conversation or company but I wasn’t all that keen to entertain that thought as she did give off a rather unpleasant unwashed aroma.

‘I wonder,’ she said, “If I could bend your ear a moment dear.’

‘Yes,’ I replied still very wary of what I might be in for.

‘I’ve lived here a long time and my days I feel are numbered. As you know I keep very much to myself and I know you and most of the people in the street think of me as a little eccentric. You see being a wicked witch is no easy thing. The expectations are enormous.

The things I have had to do, would curl your hair and to let you in on the know, so to speak, it was me who killed off Mr Turner’s radishes, laid low the Smith’s ginger cat and as for the recent flood well what can I say.

As a wicked witch I had a reputation to uphold. Chaos and mayhem are my stock in trade and I have always maintained a standard to never inflict any adverse event upon you and the Westons on the other side. After all its hard to come across good neighbours don’t you think.’

By this stage I was getting more and more uneasy, all this talk of Miss Marble being a wicked witch was hearsay and part of the towns legend.

‘You see its not all my fault. If old man Turner had agreed to supply me with radishes none of it would have happened and as for the Smiths they had it coming, stupid cat kept attacking my native animal friends and one thing I wasn’t having any truck with was a feral cat harming my natives. So I put an end to it, quickly.

But my dear I am an old lady now. Time is catching up with me. My hands are arthritic, my feet swell on hot days, the inclination to concoct spells is decreasing each day and even my desire to make my life elixir is fading as I look at a world that I don’t really know and I’m not that happy to be part of.

Too much greed and too many people far wicked than I ever was. They call them ‘colourful characters’ in the news now days.

I want you my dear to take over from me.’

‘Pardon?’ I was stunned, I stood frozen, my head said it needed me to sit as the words sunk in.

‘You see my dear, I ask you for a reason. Your grandparents were my friends, your grandmother my sister, so that makes me your great aunt. No don’t try work out my age it’s a worry to me too.

I need you to learn the spells and potions. I think the time has come for me to take down my shingle and for you to assume my mantle. I think it’s also a good time to shake off the wicked witch persona and for you to use what I show you for some good. As I said there is far too much wickedness in the world without you adding to it.’

All this time I said nothing. Miss Marble was my Aunt?

She was asking me to take on something I thought of as a curious myth within my family. My parents had made mention of a colourful family past and I never asked about it. That past was now staring me in the face.

‘Think about it my dear.’

She turned and made her way out of the house, carrying her half-cup of sugar. At the door she stopped and turned to face me. ‘Its ok you know, I responded the same way when my great aunt asked me, well over a hundred years ago. You’ll get the hang of it in time and the life elixir is such a hoot to make and a great buzz to take.’ She gave a little shudder that was more delight than horror and reached for the door.

“Drop over dear when you are ready and we’ll make a start.’

As she left a cup fell from the kitchen bench, bounced across the room and found its way into Miss Marble’s hand. In an instant she had propelled it back across the room and landed it intact on the shelf it fell from.

‘It’s a lot of fun,’ she cackled at me, closing the door behind her.

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Photo Challenge #72, Verge, August 4, 2015 – A Step Back

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Image: – Alexandre Deschaumes

Turmoil, terror, turbulent

I know you are standing at this point

Looking down

Trembling, torn and terrified.

Below is a abyss

One neither of us wants you

In any way to embrace;

For the way back is far more arduous

Than the path to prevent that fatal step.

I watch as you creep ever closer

The voices urging you on.

But the voice behind you

That says: ‘Love, we can work this out.’

Stops you short.

My hand slips into yours

Your fingers entwine

Your grip on me tight.

At my beckoning

You take a small step back.

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FFfAW – Week of 08-04 – Dividing the Paddock

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The two farmers looked at the large rocks that had stood forever in their paddock.

They both agreed the stones were a nuisance and that they couldn’t shift them. Ploughing was arduous enough without these rocks getting in the way.

The argument had raged for years. The solution always the same. They were immovable. Even dynamite had been used to no avail.

The farmer’s family insisted the stones were a beauty mark on a drab landscape.

Miss Fanny on the opposite hill maintained they had magical qualities, but most folk thought of her as insane and so that suggestion was cast into the local folklore.

On the next full moon the farmers were again standing in the same place when they noticed a strange light emanating from the rocks and straddling the distance between the two stones.

One looked at the other and immediately denied what they had seen. They decided to divide the paddock between themselves each marking his boundary as either side of the stones. Just to be safe.

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