Writing Prompt #211 “Stories By 5” – Xaos and Xara

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Topic: A Romantic Evening

Male name: Xaos

Female name: Xara

Flower: Orchid

Sound: Stairs creaking

Expression: Mischievous

 

Xaos planned for a romantic evening with his beloved Xara. She had been a having a tough time of late. She had had a baby very early in her life, and that child grew into a wild child and had run her mother a merry dance throughout her life.

But time had caught up with the wayward child, and Xara had nursed her in the final days of her life.

It is never an expected event to be the one to care for and watch your child die before you.

So, tonight Xaos planned an evening in which Xara would be indulged as he knew she deserved.

His planning went to organising catering of the highest quality. Only the best would suffice. He ordered the rare Bullamcanka Orchid and arranged for it to adorn the centre of the dining table. It was a breath-taking bloom and only once a year did it come into flower.

He was so intent in his preparation he failed to hear the stairs creaking as Xara made her way down to dinner.

He had told her it was going to be a special night and to dress as if she was going to the finest restaurant.

Xara loved Xaos with a passion, and she understood the efforts he was going to this night. So, when she entered the dining room, it was with a mischievous grin on her face, both out of curiosity and expectation at what her one great lover had prepared.

And she was not disappointed. The meal was more than she expected, she felt the glow of his love descend upon her as she sat and looked into his eyes seeing in them a love she knew was hers.

Once completed, Xaos took Xara by the hand and led her to the spa where the second part of his planned evening began.

 

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Saturday Mix–10 June 2017 – What if..

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The task this week: Tell us your alternate history story in 250 words or less.

 

I think our lives are made up of ‘what if’ scenarios. We all have had those moments where what if we weren’t standing in that spot where we met someone, saw something, heard something, what difference would it have made to us and where we are now.

For me, I have wondered about my great grandfather. In the 1860’s he went from Ireland to the USA and fought in the Civil War.

He was wounded and from what we know married a woman whom we know very little if anything about.

After the war, he returned to Ireland and obviously, a single man he married my great grandmother. In that time, the famine in Ireland was raging, and he had a small family, and as there was very little in the way of prospects and as he had a brother living in Australia he packed up his family and sailed to Australia. Hence that is how I came to be here as a descendent of this brave man and his wife.

But there is the what if factor as well. What if he decided to return to the US and to take his family there where opportunity lay, and it wasn’t as far from home as Australia. It was the factor of family that determined where he would end up. He had very little in the way of prospects it was starvation or uncertainty. Had his brother been in the US I am sure that is where I would be today.

 

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SoCS June 10/17 – admit

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This week’s prompt – “admit”

My neighbour knocked at my back door, and I sensed an urgency in the manner of his knocking.

There he stood, tears running down his checks and his hands trembling.

My reaction was to bring him inside and sit him down. The kettle I put on to make tea, and I watched as he sat there wiping his eyes.

My neighbour is not a man of emotion, and I was worried about him to the point of feeling initially speechless as I contemplated how to get him to talk about what was so obviously bothering him.

“What’s wrong?” I asked. I figured the direct approach was the only approach at a time like this.

He looked at me through his tear-filled eyes and said, “The wife and I were having a discussion, well if truth be known another argument. We were going at it as we do when she admitted she was wrong.

I was flummoxed I have to say. She took the wind out of me. I felt suddenly vocally naked in front of her.”

‘That’s a terrible situation to be in,” I said thinking of my many arguments with my wife where I knew all along that no matter what I would be proved wrong. It was the way the world was as far as I knew.

Now I had my neighbour in my kitchen, a mess, a bawling man, a man with no purpose as if life had been sucked out of him over this admission by a woman whom I knew was not in any way caring about the welfare of her husband.

“What kind of woman has she turned into?” he asked shrugging his shoulders in desperation. “I thought I knew how things went,” he continued. “We’d argue, she’d win, the world would be in balance. Now I feel the universe is out of kilter.” With that, he dissolved into tears, and there was little I could do but pass him the tissues.

 

Written for: https://lindaghill.com/2017/06/09/the-friday-reminder-and-prompt-for-socs-june-1017/

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June 8: Flash Fiction Challenge – Wifflduff

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June 8, 2017, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that involves playing an outdoor game, like tetherball, hoops, tag. It can be made up, traditional, cultural or any kind of twist. Go where the prompt leads.

 

This is a fun game to entertain kids in the back yard. The idea is to disassociate the words given with their meanings. For example, spaghetti. If you answer pasta or food, you would be wrong and out of the game. If you say dog/cat/elephant, you would be correct.

In the one minute, you attempt as many as you can. If you survive a minute, you accumulate how many you got right. One wrong and you are out, and as added fun, you have to prance around the yard like a chicken saying whiffleduffwhifflduffwhifflduff.

Hours of fun and excitement.

 

Written for: https://carrotranch.com/2017/06/09/june-8-flash-fiction-challenge/

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First Line Friday 09.06.17 – A Gun Was Fired.

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This week’s first line:

Being tied to a chair was about as unpleasant as he imagined.

Added to this was the constant taunting from the children who came by. It was as if he was in some sort of nightmare.

He was tied to a chair in the middle of the High Street, with cars zooming by and beeping horns, hands waved from windows, some giving him the bird and the occasional half-filled milkshake thrown at him.

On top of all, this was the nearness of small children who poked fun at him, struck him with stones and sticks, who called him names and told him terrible things were going to happen to him.

They had no fear of him. They stood in his face, they spat on him, one rubbed a rotten tomato in his face.

What children were these he wondered? What were they teaching them in school? It was as if they had been schooled in violence upon their tied-up elders. He wondered what their parents must be doing right now, surely, they could not be condoning this atrocious behaviour.

He was secured tightly, there was no escape. Momentarily his crime escaped him. What had he done to deserve this?

Then he remembered. The night. The victim. The run. Fleeing. He didn’t think he would catch his prey, but he did.

They did have a right he reasoned. He had done a bad thing. He was deserving of the ridicule.

He took a deep breath as another tirade of abuse landed on him. A hand shook him. There was laughter all round. He was shaken again. What now he wondered.

Then a voice reminded him of his crime. He nodded in agreement.

Then a gun was fired.

Breathe!

 

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Tale Weaver #123 08.06.17: The June Bride

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Lucy Assuch awoke to a beautifully sunny day. Today was her wedding day and the day itself looked like a blessed one. Lucy was filled with both love and excitement over what lay ahead for her. Across town, she knew her intended husband Bryce Asone was also feeling the same.

She had insisted on the tradition that neither should see each other before arriving at the church. It was the only one they did adhere to having made the most of the previous afternoon.

There was a knock on her door, and her mother had arrived holding as she did a piece of paper. Her mother was one for lists and today she had a list that was exhausting in the reading of it.

So, Lucy was out of bed, the day began with a meeting between mother and daughter mapping out the day’s events.

Taking a big breath, Lucy started her wedding preparations.

Lucy’s father was a bundle of nerves and excitement. Every friend he ever had and a few he wished he had were invited to the wedding. He was very happy to see his daughter marry an Asone. They were the most prestigious family in the village of As. He had made many a bad joke in his time but referring to their impending union, he said he was as one with their decision.

The village of As loved a wedding. They loved the tradition of it all. Virginal bride, white dresses, flowers and the expectation that the couple had refrained from all sexual activity. The community embraced the joyous occasion as their own. Houses and shops were festooned, the village band went about rehearsals with renewed vigour, and even if you weren’t invited, you still felt part of the day.

As the day went by the temperature also rose. It was going to be a hot one and added to all that the wind from the west was building and that was adding to the overall discomfort.

By wedding time the temperature was well over 100F. The small village church was packed, the minister, the Rev Paul Ashym nervously awaited the bride, as did the groom, sweating profusely but expectant.

At the appointed moment, the organist broke out a fanfare announcing the bride’s arrival. The congregation held their respective breaths as Lucy on her father’s arm came down the aisle.

Despite the heat, the ceremony went off wonderfully well. The reception after was a jolly occasion and the bride and groom given a right royal send off.

Lucy’s parents bathed the glory of their new standing in the village, Bryce was cemented to his one love forever.

Later in their bridal suite at the As Holiday Inn, they settled down on the bridal bed, to rest their weary selves after a more than exhausting day.

“Do you think anyone noticed?” asked Lucy.

“No I think we got away with it,” said Bryce lovingly stroking his wife’s beautiful face.

“They will, though won’t they?” asked Lucy.

“Be too late then,” said Bryce his eyes focused on his Mrs Asone.

“We’re having a baby,” said Lucy, “will you love me when I blow up all pregnant?”

“I’ll love you always Lucy,” said her husband.

He wrapped his arms around his new wife, drew her in close and they lay together wondering what the future was going to be like when their parents discovered she was with child.

 

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Photo Challenge #168 – Plodding Along

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As if the flat was hard enough

The suggestion of mountain ranges

Wading upstream amidst natures predators

Was too much to contemplate.

He was a plain man

Beset with faults and flaws

With social skills that struggled to be seen

He avoided the public eye

Kept to himself

Let words escape, revealing snippets

Not too much should people talk

Hidden away under the world

Safe from scrutiny

Harbouring the pain of growing up

A freak unable to connect

Ignored and the butt of many a joke.

The words of the boys haunted him

“The Creep from the Deep’.

The road ahead was flat,

He liked it that way

No one noticed, or cared,

So, he plodded along.

 

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Twittering Tale #33 – 6 June 2017

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All was in readiness
The trap had been set.
Settle back, be patient.
Wait.
The prize well worth the trouble.
A promotion rested on this success. (140 characters)

Written for: https://katmyrman.com/2017/06/06/twittering-tale-33-6-june-2017/

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FFfAW Challenge-Week of June 6, 2017 – Lost

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It’s an awful feeling knowing you are lost.

How I came to be separated from the others I’m not sure. One moment they were there the next they weren’t and I had no idea where I was.

I wandered around calling out trying to find them, but there was nothing save the sounds of the bush, the birds with their endless chatter and the wind in the trees.

I remembered reading once that if you found a stream to follow it down as it would lead to a bigger stream and possible rescue.

But the way was hazardous, huge rocks made the going tough and the vegetation was so thick in places I had to find ways round it.

Eventually I came to a place where the stream ran into a bigger stream which to my disappointment ran under a rock ledge and disappeared.

I sat and thought of my fate.

That was when the creature showed itself. I looked at it sure that what I was seeing was an animal long thought extinct.

 

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Tale Weaver – No 122 – 1/6/17 – The Doomsberry Park – Part 7 – Final

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At the question from Trica, Maunchy stopped and looked at her.

“Follow me,” she said and disappeared behind a large tropical bush which if Trica wasn’t surprised, she should have been, as the bush drew back providing an opening for Maunchy to walk through. The opening then closed with what Trica could only describe as a theatrical flourish.

Trica approached, and the bush seemed impenetrable, and she pushed aside branches and fronds which she reckoned were fighting back and just as the task seemed impossible she heard Maunchy call out to the bush to “part” and the opening re-appeared.

Inside was a huge cave, fires burnt around the walls and it had a decided medieval look to it.

The witches from before were all seated in the middle as if there was a meeting to be had. Trica approached not sure what she was to do nor where she was to sit.

“Seat?” said a voice beside her.

“You’re Crazy Manzy Pansyheart aren’t you?” said Trica a little hesitant as she looked down into the face of the questioner.

“Could be,” replied Crazy Manzy Pansyheart.

It was then that Trica felt very uncomfortable as the little witch was with an inch of her face and Trica noticed that the woman’s eyes were of a different colour and more alarming of a different shape. One was round as it should be the other was square. Always a polite girl Trica was unsure as to which eye she should be looking into.

“Manzy get your crazy self over here and sit down,” called a witch Trica did not yet know. “Sorry about Manzy but we don’t get many visitors, and her manners are non-existent. I’m Dolores Eggstract. Keeper of the vat, the time and the breakfast menu. Sit here, Maunchy will start in a moment.”

Trica sat very nervously as the witches twittered among themselves occasionally giving Trica a curious glance.

“Ladies,” announced Maunchy stepping up, “I would like to welcome a visitor. Trica is a witch chaser, so she says and has come to interview me of people, can you imagine it? So, I suggest she follow us around for the day, be polite and answer any question she asks but reserve a 46 for anything you find too hard to answer.”

This seemed to have a settling effect on the witches who all sank down in their seats as if a huge relief had been cast upon them. In fact, some were now smiling and looking and nodding at Trica with the said same smiles.

“So off you go, you all have tasks to perform I am sure. Crazy Manzy Pansyheart, could you lead us in song to start out the day.”

At this Crazy Manzy Pansyheart leapt to her feet and waltzed out to the front. She opened her mouth, and the worst sound Trica had ever heard came from her lips. There were words in there she was sure, but they were struggling to let themselves be known above the raucous din that was her voice. Trica felt she needed to block her ears, turn her head away and suddenly wished for the comfort of her own living room complete with fire, rug and a hot brew.

When she stopped the witches, all applauded politely with Manzy bowing graciously.

“What was that?” asked Trica to Dolores who was beaming in Manzy’s direction.

“That my dear was a 46,” explained Dolores, “when Maunchy instructs us to use a 46 it refers to a spell we all possess whereby any outsider will be prevented from hearing and understanding what it is we do. Asking Manzy to sing was her way of demonstrating a 46.”

“Oh, I see and was she singing anything known?” asked Trica.

“Amazing Grace, one of her best pieces. Shame you heard what you heard but trust me it was beautiful. Manzy maybe the crazy she is, but she can sing to bring tears to your eyes.”

At that, the witches departed to various parts of the cave leaving Trica alone.

During the day Trica found it best to watch, every question was answered with a noise she knew was doing her ear-drums a power of damage. She thought Manzy’s singing was bad, but each witch had a 46 all of her own.

At lunch, Trica asked Maunchy two questions. The first one was why the number 46 was used?

Maunchy remarked it was just a number but came from her time with Miss Marble of 46 Grimace Street.

To this Trica said that her research had suggested that Miss Marble was a piece of fiction and therefore didn’t exist.

Maunchy looked sideways at Trica and fixed her with a gaze that held Trica spell bound.

“Amelia Marble exists my dear. She is very real as is 46 Grimace Street.”

“But no one has ever seen her, she exists in fantasy stories.”

“Just as a 46 protects us, Miss Marble has her own version of it such that she controls who lives on Grimace Street and who can know what, when and where.”

Trica was intrigued by this revelation. For her, this made her all the more curious. She was about to ask another question when Maunchy held up her hand and said it was time for her to go.

Trica thought of the tortured journey she had undertaken to get there, and her heart sank at the thought.

“Not to worry my dear follow me,” announced Maunchy.

Trica followed Maunchy out of the cave and stood before a door. “Go through there, you’ll find yourself back on the street beside the park.”

Trica turned the doorhandle and stepped through and did find herself in the street beside the park.

She looked around to secure the landmarks so she could get back in again when she needed to. Turning back, she saw that the door way was no longer there, but the wall of the Park covered as it was by climbing vegetation.

In her mind, she smiled knowing the Park was not a place to be taken for granted.

 

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