Meeting The Bar–Following Through On Metaphor – Three Armed Woman

I see her in the street

A woman with three arms

On one arm is a blue heeler

Its trots beside her, sniffing,

Leading her along.

Her second arm hangs by her side

The third arm comes from out of her right shoulder.

Long and lean

Solid

Menacing

Don’t mess with me

Her third arm

Keeps us at arms length.

Keeping her distance

She graces me with a polite hello

Hurries off

Her mind a million miles away

In a place where so many

Sport three arms.

Wary of difference

She shirks company

Her companion loyal

Trusting

Compliant.

Her third arm affords her a weapon

A defence against…..?

Never does she attempt to hide it

Shamelessly

Its there for all to see.

We shy away

Less it is for us

To feel its bite

Its grip.

She retreats into her world

The arm rigid

Armed

Ready

I keep my distance.

Written for: http://dversepoets.com/2014/09/11/meeting-the-bar-following-through-on-metaphor/

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37 Responses to Meeting The Bar–Following Through On Metaphor – Three Armed Woman

  1. Gabriella's avatar Gabriella says:

    With such people it is indeed wise to keep one’s distance! Incredible how sometimes we just spot these people but know it is safer to keep away.

  2. ManicDdaily's avatar ManicDdaily says:

    Wow–I found this a very strong image and very powerfully conveyed. Thanks so much for participating. k.

  3. RoSy's avatar RoSy says:

    Oh c’mon Michael.
    Wouldn’t it be nice to have a third & a fourth arm? 😉

  4. That third arm is sometimes so visible, though I have also met people that were unaware of their their third arm – ending up utterly alone.

  5. claudia's avatar claudia says:

    heck yes – better to keep away from people like her… that is a great and very visible metaphor

  6. Maybe it’s just me.yes I’m sure it is, I got a bit lost 😦

  7. Grace's avatar Grace says:

    I like the imagery of the third arm….imaginary or not, you drew an excellent character of her ~ Best to stay away from her ~ Good one Michael ~

  8. Mary's avatar Mary says:

    Some people are best kept at bay. If they send a foreboding message by their stance and demeanor, I think we need to ‘listen.’

  9. billgncs's avatar billgncs says:

    sometimes I wonder why someone needed that arm. and this poem reminds me to be more open, a better man.

  10. I’m late to the party but am enjoying reading all the different takes on the idea. Some people do have the ability to keep people away in this manner…to their loss as well as that of those who might get to know and like them.

    janet

    • Hello janet, thank you for reading and your comment. You make a very good point as I have often thought this woman keeps others at bay to her detriment, but I guess she has good reason, who is to know.

  11. indigowildchild55's avatar Pat says:

    Brilliantly written Michael – and I haven’t even checked the prompt. And so it is, regardless of what prompted you – you have written a very strong piece here – infusing such life in a character, with grace and elegance – simply – well done 🙂

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