Prompt #62 Chi ku – The Maid

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I am awake at first light

There is water to draw

Dough to knead

Floors to sweep

Washing to do.

Meals to cook.

My days are repetitious

Some old day in day out.

But I am content

My life could be worse

My master appreciates me

Gives me time to gather flowers

Time to walk the forest paths

To sit and commune with natures beauty.

I am well aware of others

Far worse off than me.

Though my days are long,

The tedium mind numbing

I take pride in my work

Try to look my best

Always appear in high spirits.

Some nights, the master,

Holds a ball, invites the well to do

To wine, dine and dance the night away.

In my best maids outfit I enjoy the work

A break from the tedium of the everyday

For as long and tiring as the night is

And I drag myself to my bed

And sleep the sleep of the exhausted.

I am pleased for this variation

When so much is monotonous.

Any variance is welcomed

Knowing the alternative is another day

Of banally bland humdrumness.

 

Written for: http://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2014/06/29/prompt-62-chi-ku/

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36 Responses to Prompt #62 Chi ku – The Maid

  1. Great example of seeing the best in one’s situation!

  2. Lyn's avatar Lyn says:

    This is wonderful, Michael. If only we could all be this content in our job.

  3. Beautiful – the elegance of simplicity! 🙂

  4. A mother who is needed sees not any of her toil as sacrifice but being a mom:) Beautifully written, Michael.

  5. JackieP's avatar JackieP says:

    If one must work, it’s good to enjoy the job. Really well done Michael.

  6. This is what I tell myself when things become monotonous or dreary: my life could be worse, so best I stop complaining before the Fates make it worse!
    My writing teammate and I created a character study using the prompt.
    http://hickswyliedna.blogspot.com/2014/06/emily-katherine-salvatore-sad-eyed-lady.html

  7. phylor's avatar phylor says:

    A positive, pleasant read. She understands her place within society, and while tedious and dull, it keeps her safe.

  8. RoSy's avatar RoSy says:

    I really like this. I feel her. I love how she enjoys life no matter what.

  9. Georgia's avatar Bastet says:

    This reads so smoothly, like the feel of thoughts flowing through her mind. A good one!

  10. Eezna's avatar eezna says:

    Where do you get all the inspiration from? So beautifully worded.

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