Poetry Prompt 46 – Heirloom – Great Grandparents Clock

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1903, my great grandparents

Left their long time home

One-time graziers,

Parents to four daughters

Now aging moved closer to the coast

Lived their days out in my house.

The clock was a gift from grateful people

Why I have not been able to discover.

A job for me to uncover one day.

Not much is known about them

They cared for a grandson

No family name carried on from them.

Their grave is nearby,

A lasting monument

They had money.

The daughters built houses after their deaths.

Today this timepiece resides in my lounge room,

Thankfully it doesn’t work.

It chimes every fifteen minutes

I recall it as a child

Chiming all through the night.

But it stands as a reminder

Of family

Of connection

Of significance.

My mother had it restored,

Each evening we turned the key

Kept the pendulum swinging

The chimes chiming.

I like the memories it generates

It belongs in this house.

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Written for: http://pookypoetry.wordpress.com/2014/06/15/poetry-prompt-46-heirloom/

I wrote a version of this poem some time ago for another prompt but Pooky’s prompt gave me a chance to do a revision.

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18 Responses to Poetry Prompt 46 – Heirloom – Great Grandparents Clock

  1. A nostalgic piece Michael, yes it does belong in your home, because as you say it’s your connection to your past.

  2. PookyH's avatar PookyH says:

    I love this – I love to imagine the stories of items and places in the past. Of course you have both as you’re living in your family home aren’t you?

  3. Suzanne's avatar Suzanne says:

    What a fine memory and sense of personal history. I share your pleasure in the fact the clock doesn’t work. I can’t stand loud ticking myself.

  4. JackieP's avatar JackieP says:

    A nice memento from times gone by, especially since it honors family members. Well done Michael.

  5. What a lovely clock! A nice reminder of “times” passed and your family. Glad it does not work. My grandmother had a clock like that and I was an insomniac then too, so every time it chimed reminded me how late it was getting…grrrr. but it was beautiful as well, my uncle has it now.

    • I’m glad it doesn’t work either. It’s good to have items from the past that have been part of our lives for so long. Thanks Oliana for reading and your visit is always welcomed.

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