Photo Challenge 11 “Fever by You” – I Heard You Call

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Despair comes to mind

Cast into a pit of loneliness

Left to wallow

In a mire of my own excrement.

Self inflicted I was told

Deserving of nothing

A pitiless,

Laughing stock,

A herald of shame.

I had become content

Rolling day after day

In the hopelessness I knew was mine,

Until I heard you call.

Your gentleness awoke me

Startled me, I was taken aback

Used as I was to more strident voices.

You picked me up

Carried me far from that putrid hole,

Cleaned, clothed and fed me.

You watched as I ate

Ravenous

Animal like for

I had forgotten the nuance of kindness.

At first I suspected you

To at any minute turn on me

Cast me back into my abyss,

The moment you discovered

The creature that I was.

But you understood

Listened to my story

Stroked my brow

Nestled me in your bed

Accepted who I was.

I am grateful,

Thankful

I didn’t know heavenly bodies existed

Within my world,

Let alone love me as you do.

I now have a future

One where hope, love,

And compassion are my reality.

Those dark forbidding doors now locked

Their unspeakable hideousness cast

Into a turd filled existence

Of their own.

 

Written for: http://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2014/06/03/photo-challenge-11-fever-by-you/

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18 Responses to Photo Challenge 11 “Fever by You” – I Heard You Call

  1. Into a turd filled existence

    That line made me giggle

    This is beautiful I love how you’ve written this it truly is a stunning poem and I love how you’ve made this into a love story wonderfully done Michael!

  2. Georgia's avatar Bastet says:

    What an extraordinary voyage of a lost and lonely person … into new life. Great.

  3. JackieP's avatar JackieP says:

    What a wonderful story you have woven Michael. One filled with despair and loneliness to one filled with love and acceptance. So nicely done!

  4. RoSy's avatar RoSy says:

    YAY for hope!

  5. What a beautiful story!! I started reading and felt so sad for the pain inflicted on this person and it turns into a beautiful love story. Very hopeful and romantic.

  6. spectraghostseeker's avatar spectraghostseeker says:

    This person is lucky to have found someone like that. I had to be that someone for myself. It isn’t nearly as romantic.
    Powerful poem!

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