Poetry Prompt 25 – Extended Metaphor – Enigma

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I am my own enigma.

I always have been.

I struggle to be ‘normal,

I know I am not as other men

For I don’t behave as others

I stand apart and I am ok with that.

My son has his own syndrome

A trait I am sure he thanks me for.

For when I was a child I was me

Different from my siblings

I played sport, read, wrote,

Succeeded at school, but I had limitations.

I don’t party, I avoid crowds

It seems to get worse as I age

Though now I better understand

The enigma that I am.

Yet despite the oddity that I am

I have around me many who love me.

Who see me as father, brother and friend,

But even more amazing

Is the one who calls me lover

Who sees way past the puzzling enigma

And loves the man I am.

 

Written for: http://pookypoetry.wordpress.com/2014/05/25/poetry-prompt-25-extended-metaphor/

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23 Responses to Poetry Prompt 25 – Extended Metaphor – Enigma

  1. Gabriella's avatar Gabriella says:

    Great and honest poem, Michael! It is good to be surrounded by family, friends and have a very special person in one’s life.

  2. Awe I love this it’s so positive and self believing x

  3. Honesty the best policy, thank you for sharing, you are an Enigma indeed… a good one

  4. Grace's avatar Grace says:

    How lovely find someone who loves you passed your puzzling enigma ~ Hope you have a lovely weekend Michael ~

  5. jetgirlcos's avatar jetgirlcos says:

    It’s beautifully expressed. We can only be ourselves, right? Normal is a fallacy…in fact, we are each loved for our uniqueness. Thanks for sharing.

  6. JackieP's avatar JackieP says:

    Lovely post Michael. Being different than most other men is a good thing. As your friends and family and certainly your lover will attest to.

  7. PookyH's avatar PookyH says:

    A special partner indeed x

  8. RoSy's avatar RoSy says:

    Way to go – always be true to who you are. It’s not always easy – but – I too am who I am. 😉

  9. Lyn's avatar Lyn says:

    Couch Potatoes…Ahh yes, I can relate to that. I’d much rather stay at home and veg out.

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