Bastet’s Shadorma Photo Prompt #5 – Stepping Out

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From darkness

Into your light

Magical

Mystery

A step into the future

I cannot wait.

 

Cats

Four boys

Our open door

Five thousand steps later

This.

 

Brightness

Excitement awaits

Tomorrow

So soon

Journey to create a life

An expectation

 

Written for: http://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2014/04/26/bastets-shadorma-photo-prompt-5-april-26-2014/

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31 Responses to Bastet’s Shadorma Photo Prompt #5 – Stepping Out

  1. The first one is my favorite but they are all beautiful and inspiring XD

  2. Agreed all good, last one my favourite 🙂

  3. Bastet says:

    Glad you took up the challenge, you did a great job with it! I won’t choose one stanza over another, they’re all perfect together. Thanks Michael for joining!

  4. JackieP says:

    I liked it all Michael, but hard to pick a favorite, Well done!

  5. I like that you use the stairs and light of day to create an adventure full of possibilities.

  6. PookyH says:

    The last builds such a sense of expectation.

  7. RoSy says:

    I like all three.
    I especially like the hope that’s filled with your first take.

  8. Wonderful Michael, they all make perfect sense 🙂

  9. Pingback: Bastet’s Shadorma Photo Prompt #6 | Mindlovemisery's Menagerie

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