D’verse – Kennings – the metaphor of Skalds – Crone

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A kenning is a very brief metaphoric phrase or compound word and it means “to know” (derived from Icelandic, but exist in many other languages like Swedish and German). It was used extensively in Old Norse (later Icelandic) and Anglo Saxon poetry as a mean of adding both colour, and better meter to the skaldic songs

You were not always heavy-handed,

I always thought you petite.

The long afternoons, spell-bound,

In each other’s presence, entranced.

What happened, innocence-laced

Girl child became repugnant crone.

You spread your poison-words

Spoiling everything you touch

Not caring, hell-bent inflicting

Pain at every opportunity.

I protect my faultless-offspring

Knowing I suffer.

Aware the knife-launch

Could be seconds away.

Once you were wide-eyed

Bushy tailed, innocuous

Witchy-ways were harmless

Now a weapon of mass-destruction.

 

Written for: http://dversepoets.com/2014/03/20/kennings-the-metaphor-of-skalds/

 

 

 

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46 Responses to D’verse – Kennings – the metaphor of Skalds – Crone

  1. Gabriella's avatar Gabriella says:

    You have used some very strong kennings here, Michael! Things are all the harder when we have been lulled by innocence and eventually have to come to a painful awakening.

  2. brian miller's avatar brian miller says:

    whew….people can change pretty quick eh? and once soured can do quite a bit of damage…hard to see them change as well knowing who they once were…well paced piece too…kennings tucked nicely in…

  3. Mary's avatar Mary says:

    It is so difficult to deal with those who spread poison-words. They definitely can be weapons of mass-destruction in the hands of those who choose to act in that sort of way. I can feel strong feelings in this poem.

  4. JackieP's avatar JackieP says:

    Wow, people like that give Witchy people a bad name. Strong, powerful Michael. It is indeed hard to deal with a person like that. I know that myself. But it makes for great writing.

  5. billgncs's avatar billgncs says:

    that was really well done

  6. RoSy's avatar RoSy says:

    “…Witchy-ways were harmless
    Now a weapon of mass-destruction.”
    YIKES!

    Where’s the happy ending to this fairy-tale? 😉
    I guess like reality – not all stories have happy endings – eh?

  7. Wit by ways, now how many of us females get that tag …looks… A dramatic entry loved the girl child became repugnant crone, nicely done for the prompt my friend.

  8. Ok so I typed witchy and my IPad typed wit by…. Good grief 😦

  9. Bryan Ens's avatar Bryan Ens says:

    Wonderful poem…a cautionary tale too!

  10. claudia's avatar claudia says:

    well played off that pic and what a change indeed… so sad and have seen that happen with people… it’s tough…

  11. When bitterness infects it can become a disease to spread… Very good kennings you used.. Shows that sometimes it become easier to create them on strong subjects.

  12. Well..your words certainly speak truth here of BEAUTY as much more than skin deep only..

    Some folks age gracefully..
    and other folks..age ..well..
    sometimes
    hatefully..

    So sad as the spirit..
    never ages..
    when tended as flower..
    instead of
    thorn…

  13. Kathy Reed's avatar kkkkaty1 says:

    Can relate to the damage done….esp like faultless offspring 😉

  14. Very powerful and can be transferred to so many situations, great poem

  15. Ooh, now this has an old world feel to it, which I really like. Witchy-ways… delicious kenning!

  16. Georgia's avatar Bastet says:

    from lady-love
    to haunty-hag
    her honey-tongue
    became a pitchfork
    hellish-tool
    the wounded
    your love-struck
    heart …

    Great poem…sad about the inspiration though!

  17. Wow! Michael, what a character…to avoid by all means! This prompt seems to have had lots of material from which to be inspired. Well done.

  18. shanyns's avatar shanyns says:

    Wow. When crone wisdom becomes a bitter power it is dangerous…well done!

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