MeetingTheBar: The Blind Poet – My Love

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I know when you come in

You have a way of breathing

It gives you away every time.

Even when you try and surprise me

I smell you, the lavender soap,

The soft powder on your skin.

I love the feel of your arms,

They enfold me, ensnare me

I ask for no more than your love.

Your touch, inflames me

Awakens my senses

For then I truly see you.

Written for: http://dversepoets.com/2014/03/13/meetingthebar-the-blind-poet/

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43 Responses to MeetingTheBar: The Blind Poet – My Love

  1. brian miller's avatar brian miller says:

    smiles…and love allows us to see them in ways little else does…
    i can def tell when the one i care for enters the room…
    the way they breathe…smiles….now that is knowing them…

  2. Mary's avatar Mary says:

    Sometimes a person can ‘see’ much more through touch than through one’s eyes. And more thn that, a person can feeI! I like your presentation here, Michael.

  3. LindaM's avatar LindaM says:

    Yes, sometimes things seem to become more real when touched.

  4. billgncs's avatar billgncs says:

    very sensual – the awakening before the crescendo

  5. and how pleasurable is it with eyes closed to know that ‘someone’ is there, by their touch and smell alone – a sensual write and a very interesting photo to go with it.

  6. claudia's avatar claudia says:

    nice… smell is such an intimate additional dimension… knowing the one you love by their smell… i do as well…

  7. Georgia's avatar Bastet says:

    Nice and so wholey sensuous! Love reading this!

  8. Gabriella's avatar Gabriella says:

    I enjoyed reading what this blind poet can smell and feel!

  9. Abhra Pal's avatar Abhra Pal says:

    Oh yes – I love how you see through your senses here, not depending on sight – very intimate and beautiful.

  10. splkplo's avatar Laurie Kolp says:

    Wow. I’m blinded by that picture.

  11. RoSy's avatar RoSy says:

    Lovely…Soft, sensual, ahhh…

  12. This is so much power in the sense of smell to elicit both feeling and memories.

  13. What a photo – definitely managed cubism! Yes this is a sensuous as much as sensual love poem – the familiar language creates a place of love and comfort and safety.

  14. hypercryptical's avatar hypercryptical says:

    Beautiful words of the knowing of love – and yes very sensual. Lovely.
    Anna :o]

  15. Ah.. that climax.. when you truly see you.. a little be like the biblical way of “knowing” your love…

  16. JackieP's avatar JackieP says:

    Really nice sensual poem Michael. I like it a lot! Makes one want to close the eyes and just ‘feel’.

  17. Intimate, erotic, real. Tastefully done.

  18. ManicDdaily's avatar ManicDdaily says:

    Wow. Super sensual– well – paced. Thanks. K.

  19. lucychili's avatar lucychili says:

    yes knowing someone can be a very delicate thing
    the essence of someone

  20. Lila's avatar Lila says:

    So sensual and tasteful. I enjoyed reading this. I must say the sense of smell is intense for me too, and I am aware of how others’ breathing sounds like as well… smiles. Well done.

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