Before you on my bended knees
I await your command.
But there is none,
You take me into your arms
Comfort me, your warmth,
Shelters me from winter storms.
I shed real tears
My heart bleeds
You enfold me
Understanding my pain.
Please don’t walk away
I need you to reassure me
That your love for me.
Is pure
Not disposable
As if on a whim.
Look at me my love,
My love is yours
Is yours mine?

Cool poem!! 🙂 🙂
Thank you so much Helen. Hope you are well this morning.
Feeling pretty good actually. First draft of the novel done so I’m doing the less labour intensive process of re-reading/reviewing, looking for continuity errors etc. 🙂
That’s great Helen, good luck with it all
That’s a fantastic poem. Love it.
Thank you so much Al, I always appreciate your comments.
You’re welcome 🙂 Have a good day today
I think that RamblingsFromAMum must be a very intelligent person 😉 Juz…sayin’ well done mate – I liked
oh by the way *poke* he’s sittin’ beside me and he ain’t getting the keyboard!
But now I do have it. Thank you Jenny, i did enjoy playing with the words you sent me. Happy you enjoyed them too.
You are a natural poet!
Oh RoSy, you are so kind. really I am just a man who shapes words.But thank you for that lovely comment.