Trifecta – What Scares You.

Posted on October 18, 2013 by Michael

What Scares You

Unplaceable creaks in the night

Unfathomable sounds

You hear as you lay down to sleep.

What causes it?

Where is it?

Will it get me?

Of course not silly.

Why?

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42 Responses to Trifecta – What Scares You.

  1. PookyH's avatar PookyH says:
    October 18, 2013 at 7:33 pm

    I enjoyed your words – is trifecta a form (I thought it was a kind of bet, that just shows my misspent youth I guess!)

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  3. Kir Piccini's avatar Kir Piccini says:
    October 18, 2013 at 7:36 pm

    sometimes I’m convinced that it’s only when our minds are quiet, that we hear the most. Esp what scares us.

    Good piece

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  4. joetwo's avatar joetwo says:
    October 18, 2013 at 7:53 pm

    You always have to check that the creak you heard at night isn’t a serial killer coming to get you. Better safe than sorry! Good one!

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  5. Helen's avatar helenvalentina says:
    October 18, 2013 at 8:46 pm

    Wonderful…now I’m wondering why…reminds me of a few nights ago when I woke up convinced someone was walking heavily up the inside stairs in my townhouse only to realise it was actually my own heartbeat in my ear, resting against the pillow…so easy to spook oneself in he dark of the night, LOL!! 🙂 🙂

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  6. Renee TennisMcKinley (@2old2tap)'s avatar Renee TennisMcKinley (@2old2tap) says:
    October 18, 2013 at 9:17 pm

    Oh those creaks and thumps in the night…are usually my cats. I knew I had pets for a reason. Good writing!

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  7. RoSy's avatar RoSy says:
    October 18, 2013 at 10:48 pm

    Oh – spooky happenings with certain noises, creeks, & squeaks.

    As a kid – I was afraid of El Cucuy.
    http://sharingmemyselfandi.wordpress.com/2012/10/31/el-cucuy/

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  8. ramblingsfromamum's avatar ramblingsfromamum says:
    October 19, 2013 at 12:44 am

    why you ask, hmm the silence of the night brings forth many a strange noise, most of them in our imaginings.

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  9. Cocoa (Cubby)'s avatar Cubby says:
    October 19, 2013 at 3:16 am

    It’s a good thing I didn’t read this 10 years ago as I would most likely not be able to sleep…not that I can anyways. Creepy! 🙂

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  10. misstinypurple's avatar ym1611 says:
    October 19, 2013 at 3:55 am

    My original piece was something allong the lines of this. So glad to know I’m not the ONLY one who is scared of the dark 😛

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  11. jannatwrites's avatar jannatwrites says:
    October 19, 2013 at 7:02 am

    This makes me think of when I was in elementary school, and even junior high. We lived in a fairly old house that made lots of noises. I would swear the creaks and cracks were getting closer to my room- I even heard footsteps on carpet. I would have myself so terrified that I’d break into a sweat and was too scared to scream. I still have nightlights 🙂

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  12. Draug419's avatar Draug419 says:
    October 19, 2013 at 3:41 pm

    That last word is the most chilling one!

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  13. trifectawriting's avatar trifectawriting says:
    October 20, 2013 at 12:21 pm

    Yikes. I hope I can sleep tonight after reading these. 🙂 I’ve got both cats and kids, so I can generally explain away the bumps in the night. But. . .

    Thanks for linking up. Don’t forget to vote.

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  14. Suzanne's avatar Suzanne says:
    October 20, 2013 at 1:37 pm

    It’s amazing all the things you can hear in the dark. What a great take on the prompt! 🙂

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  16. KymmInBarcelona's avatar KymmInBarcelona says:
    October 20, 2013 at 10:19 pm

    Love the progress from what to where to will it get me!

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  17. Linda Vernon's avatar Linda Vernon says:
    October 20, 2013 at 10:50 pm

    Oh Summers! You’ve chosen something that really scares me. I rarely get scared but when I do it’s just when I just lay down to sleep. Maybe it’s because we are at our most vulnerable, then. Excellent job!

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