Tag Archives: criticism

SoCS Nov. 14/15 – Indescribable

Dear Sir, It has come to my attention that within the blogging world that you are a person of some integrity and experience as a person of learning and discernment. I am a fledgling writer and poet and I am … Continue reading

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100 Word Challenge for Grown Ups – Week#168 – The Blue was Sapphire

This weeks prompt: …the blue was sapphire…   ‘You are adult undertaking an adult orientated writing task so there is an expectation that you will conduct yourself appropriately.’ I received this comment and realised my writing was under scrutiny and … Continue reading

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Photo Challenge #22 “Seesaw”

You flit you know From one spot to another Like emotions stuck on the see saw of life You never flutter That’s too much to ask for Too predictable you might say. So you flit interminably While those behind struggle … Continue reading

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All in a Word…Criticism – The Letter

A letter arrived, eagerly awaited. Dear Sir, in response to your poem We were puzzled by the content, The metaphor bewildered us Left a lot to be desired Our readers would find Your poem far too obtuse. Our readers are … Continue reading

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