Writing Prompt #205 “Stories By 5” – Quest and Qestral

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A life-changing relationship  

Qestral stood at the end of her father, Quest’s bed, and looked at her failing father.

He had always been an unhappy man and as death approached his mood was as dark as ever.

He was ever restless nowadays, the candle that had been his life was slowing burning down with no hope of relighting.

She reflected on his life and her life with him. There was never anything peachy about him or his way of seeing things. He longed to regale her about his harsh childhood, living in a shoebox on the side of the road he’d say.

His family, all seven of them squeezed into a space three would have found a tight fit. He’d look around at the suburban sprawl and say: “Luxury, all these houses, driveways, hot and cold running water, back yards, sheer luxury compared to what we had. We lived shoulder to shoulder in a cardboard box on the side of the road and if we were lucky we didn’t end up being blown onto the highway run over by a cattle truck. I woke up one morning and saw that one leg was south of where I’d left it the night before, and the other one was north. I crawled along the road grabbing both legs, reattached them before my father would wake and thrash me within an inch of my life if I hadn’t fetched the water from the freezing river so he could have a cold shave.

But we didn’t complain, we knew life was tough, we knew we had it better than the Dobson’s who were forced to live in the middle of a round-about all seasons of the year with only an old umbrella to save them from the elements.

You, young people, don’t know how good you have it.”

Qestral listened to this so often during last years of his life. It was true he’d had a hard upbringing, with a stepfather who cared little for him and a mother who was an alcoholic but he liked to embellish his recall of those times.

As death approached, Quest knew his time was up. He grew more and more restless, he insisted the candle beside him was kept alight, as long as he could see the flame he knew there was still life.

The next morning, she came as she had done every morning for the past two weeks, to find that Quest’s quest in life had come to an end. She drew the sheet up over his head and sat and cried for a father who despite his failings, had been her dad, a man who struggled with reality but who had learned to value the love of his child.

 

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Thursday photo prompt – Child – #writephoto – The Child

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As a child, she had everything that opened and shut, that could be rocked or cradled. But despite all this, she was an unhappy child.

Every photo suggested this was her demeanour. Always there was the scowling child, bottom lip slightly in pouting position as if making sure history recorded her dissatisfaction with her world.

Each day she would be taken from her bed and given breakfast, washed and dressed for the day. Her parents were busy people and they employed a series of nannies to oversee their daughter’s childhood. By a series of nannies, I do mean a series as she was not a pleasant child to be around and most nannies didn’t last very long.

Miss Annie Mangle was one such nanny. A pleasant but firm young lady who came from a working-class family to the north. She could see the child lacked, for one thing, the love and attention of her parents.

She tried her best to break through to the child, to make her feel, her love and attention might compensate for the dearth she received from her parents.

But it was all to no avail. The child was obstinate, stubborn and every word the nanny thought applied to a child who appeared to be beyond help.

Such was the child’s behaviour she rarely spoke to her nannies. She listened and acted, ate when food was given to her and lay in her bed at rest time. Conversation was not something she sought from any of the women who entered her life.

After six months of trying and persevering Miss Annie Mangle resigned her position. She felt the child was a case a far more experienced nanny might fare better than she.

So, one morning she announced to the child she was leaving. Explaining that she was sure it was her inexperience that led to very little progress, as Annie Mangle imagined it, being achieved.

The child listened as always and nodded her understanding and went off to find a book to read. There was one she always sought out when a nanny left. It was a small picture book an aunt had given her years before: “Alone on the Plymouth Rock”. She connected with the boy in the story, living his life alone with his parents in a lighthouse on what he called the end of the earth.

Her world was like that, as if living alone was badly enough, having little to no interaction with those she desperately wanted to have interactions with, crushed her inside.

She knew Miss Mangle had tried, she knew it was to a large degree her fault Miss Mangle was leaving. But Miss Mangle had been different and as the nanny took her leave the child looked up and said: “Thank you, Miss Mangle.”

Those were the only words Annie Mangle heard from the child’s lips.

 

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Saturday Mix — Lorraine 29.04.17 – When Lilies Spring.

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Spring had sprung and then,

It sprang out of the green algae covered pond

Forcing the lilies to spring for dear life

As the algae threatened to devour

Each and every one of the pretty little things.

The lily pads had unto them a mind of their own

They said in their unique lily speak

Up yours Mr Algae

This is spring and we, dear sir, have sprung.

 

Written for: https://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2017/04/29/saturday-mix-lorraine-29-04-17/

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Inside the pond lily,

Hidden from sight

There lies a mechanism

As fierce as any warrior

Capable of fighting all and any

Who might prevent its growth in spring.

Each microscopic disc

Contains a nuclear arsenal

To engender growth

And promote defence.

They are hardy,

There is no doubt,

So appreciate them as nature’s survivors

For they thrive in all conditions.

 

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First Line Friday 25.04.17 –A Bit of a Wait.

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First line this week:

Three hours into the desert their engine choked and buckled, rolling dark smoke into the pale blue sky.

One looked at the other and then back at the smoke billowing from their vehicle.

They were a long way by now from anywhere.

The sun was doing what it did best in the desert, baking everything it fell upon.

In their minds, they thought of the consequences of this moment.

Death.

Waiting.

Water.

Death.

Walking.

Waiting.

Death.

The odds were not good.

They had told the road house-keeper of their plans. They would be expected in the next town by sundown.

They checked their supplies. Plenty of water. Plenty of food, if you liked dried beef.

They checked their GPS.

No signal.

But wait said one there is this.

He produced a mirror.

With that, he began reflecting the sun’s beams. He knew they could be seen beyond the horizon.

The next day after enduring the heat of the day and the cold of the night help arrived.

By then they were getting desperate and stupid ideas such as “let’s walk for help” began to enter their minds.

They were extra relieved when a van with ‘Roadside Assistance’ printed on the side pulled up beside them.

 

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Tale Weaver #117: Observations 27.04.17 – The Wrong Target

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There was always one she thought as she sat in the waiting area.

Gullible and every ready to be taken advantage of.

A smorgasbord of subjects in a busy airport but she knew she had to choose the right one.

The older, the more likely they would be to fall for her take.

Around her milled a cross section of society.

The young, the children tagging behind parents eager to find their way to their departure gate. The middle-aged and the elderly often sauntering along on their walking sticks or carrying their possessions on their back expectant of the adventure they must to about to embark on.

Then she saw her target. An older woman, grey hair tied back, a small backpack and an air of abandonment. She watched the woman finding her way to a seat near gate 46 and waited for her to be settled before moving in.

Her method was simple, engage the person in idle chit chat and gain their confidence. It had worked so well before. Always she had left richer than when she sat down.

There was a seat next to her target, and she made her way to it, placed herself down and adjusted her bags. It was important, she knew, to look like you were about to get on a plane like all the other travellers around her.

She exchanged pleasantries, the weather, the queues, the business of the airport. Then she inquired as to the woman’s destination, and always she had a comment about where her targets were going. If it was a destination she was unfamiliar with, then she’d ask pertinent questions to find out why they were going there.

Her target was on her way home to Newcastle after a visit with friends. When asked what the woman did at her home in Newcastle the woman looked at her and said she dabbled in a bit of this and that. Then the woman asked her what it was she did.

This was her way in. She went into her spin about going home to treat her sick mother, how the expenses were such that it was an uphill battle to make ends meet, to pay for the medication her ill mother needed. She made mention that she was in the process of applying for a grant of money to enable her to employ a full-time carer for her mother. Then the part about how wonderful a mother she had been and she was the person she was because of the tireless work her mother had done. Every time she had spun this tale she had gotten better at it. Usually, her target was in tears by the end of her story, feeling and hearing the desperation in the story-tellers voice and ever willing to help in any way he/she could.

Then it was the apology if she was implying she was after the person’s money, saying she wasn’t asking for help but just telling the story and after allowing the target to insist on helping she would feign acceptance of the person’s generosity promising to keep her in the loop after exchanging email addresses.

At the next call of a departure away from the gate she was near she would up and go, money safely in her pocket and now looking for another victim.

This time it was different. The woman she targeted had listened to her tale and had shown all the signs of acceptance, and she was sure would part with a sizeable piece of her money.

Instead, the woman reached into her bag and gave the woman an envelope and told her to open when she was gone. Not wishing to appear ungrateful the woman accepted the envelope and departed the scene.

Away from her target, she opened the envelope to find a small note inside.

 

“Upon reading this note your power of speech will be taken from you. It will reappear when you are home and away from vulnerable people. Your scam is a good one, but I’m sorry my dear today you picked the wrong target.

Signed, Miss Amelia Marble.”

 

The woman laughed at the contents and as she approached her next target and opened her mouth to speak the horror hit her. She was without speech.

 

 

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April 27: Flash Fiction Challenge – Massage

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April 27, 2017 prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that includes oil. It can be an oil refinery, the raw product or used as a commodity. How does oil fit into a plot or a genre? Go where the prompt leads.

It was the best and worst of massage. The girl with pudgy fingers slapped on the massage oil which I could feel running under my stomach.

Her fingers generated the nervousness you associate with a first-time massage.

She had used far too much oil, her fingers slipped every so often and dug into my neck creating a pain and anxiety such that with my brain asked the pertinent question: “Does this woman know what she is doing?”

She forged ahead, with muscles manipulated, I felt the beginnings of relief, before she slapped me on the rump announcing job done.

 

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FFfAW Challenge-Week of April 25, 2017 – Out to Lunch

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“It’s always the same isn’t it when we go out,” she said.

“What’s always the same?” he replied sipping his coffee.

“The way you order. It’s always the large size for you and small for me.”

“It isn’t. You are exaggerating.”

“No, I’m not, it’s true. We go for coffee and look, you order a large for yourself and small for me.”

“But you always say you don’t want too much. So, I’m looking out for you.”

“Well, I’m just saying you do this without ever asking me if I feel like a larger size or not.”

“Well in future I’ll ask then.”

“It’s manners don’t you think?”

“Are you saying I’m impolite?”

“Sometimes you just don’t think.”

“That’s insulting, I do think and I think about you all the time.”

“Well that’s the issue, isn’t it. You think about me but never ask me.”

“Oh, for goodness sake, lunch is here now eat up, I ordered you the chopped liver.”

“Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!”

 

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Twittering Tale #27 – 25 April 2017

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The more he revealed in the image the more real she became.
The eyes said it all.
They held him in awe.
He so loved the allure of that girl. (138 characters)

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Wordle #152 – Marmalade Toast

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This week’s words: Lightly House  Petulant (adj.)) moved to or showing sudden, impatient irritation, especially over some trifling annoyance)  Liberosis ((n.) the desire to care less about things—to loosen your grip on your life, to stop glancing behind you every few steps, afraid that someone will snatch it from you before you reach the end zone—rather to hold your life loosely and playfully, like a volleyball, keeping it in the air, with only quick fleeting interventions, bouncing freely in the hands of trusted friends, always in play.) Tall Banish Officer Afternoon Kill Marmalade Wardrobe Attitude

“Marmalade is best spread on buttered toast,” she said spreading lightly a thick layer over the fresh piece of grain toast.

In a house in a non-descript town in an even more nondescript street sat Cyril Rum, Angel on sabbatical from Heaven and his neighbour Mildred Thrup, socially challenged but with a heart of gold.

Cyril was forever wanting to learn more and more about human customs and breakfast was one that always amazed him. Marmalade was one of those concoctions that Cyril was puzzled over. He couldn’t understand why man went to such lengths to cook up orange peels and bottle them in a sticky sugary substance.

The two neighbours would often kill an afternoon in earnest conversation about the pros and cons of modern earthly life.

His whole attitude to living amongst humanity was to learn all he could. There was never any suggestion of petulance from Cyril but rather a constant curious nature.

Mildred, on the other hand, was more liberosis in her attitude in so much that she quickly caught on the limited nature of Cyril’s understanding of things human.

She was of the opinion that if she took him as she found him and went along with his tale of being an Angel, there was no telling where her liberosis might take her. She prided herself on knowing such a word. She was a tall and awkward woman, whose wardrobe didn’t endear her to many and that suited her just fine. Society had long banished to the back row of most society functions and that enabled her to spend her time learning all she could. The thesaurus was one of her best friends and she knew far more words than most and would on occasion drop a word into the conversation just to see the look of the recipients face. She remembered the pompous officer she encountered when on holiday once who demanded she stand aside and let him pass and Mildred had reminded him that manners were not so hard to come by. It was one occasion when being of a liberosic nature played perfectly into her hands.

On the kitchen table in front of them sat the marmalade spread toast waiting for Cyril to sink in his teeth.

“Ugh,” he said, “that’s ever so bitter.”

Mildred laughed and remarked that his taste buds were less angelic than she thought.

 

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Writing Prompt, April 23rd – Dialogue pairing – Interview with Shakespeare.

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This week’s task: I would like you to write a dialogue piece- by making two different characters talk.

It can be your newly created characters, but what I would prefer to see is pitting different characters together, such as dead famous people, or famous fictional characters against one another.

“Good evening and welcome to Theatre Tonight. Tonight, you are in for a real treat, for making his way from Stratford on Avon is young William Shakespeare. Good evening and welcome William.”

“Good evening, and thanks for the warm welcome.”

“Now I see you’ve penned a few plays in your time Will. I may call you Will?”

“Of course.”

“Did you ever think they’d take off as they have?”

“Well no, I wrote them for the Kings Men, our Royal performance troupe. I didn’t think they’d stand up to too much public scrutiny, to be honest.”

“Well four hundred years later they are still being performed and I think every child in the English-speaking world has studied one or two.”

“It’s all very flattering isn’t it.”

“Do you have a favourite?”

“Well, I have several in fact that I thought stood out for me. A Midsummer Night’s Dream, King Lear and Macbeth. They all served a purpose you know, written for specific occasions some of them.”

“What do you say to people who contend that the language you used is convoluted and hard for the average man to understand.”

“Poppycock.”

“Poppycock?”

“Yes, indeed it was the theatre language of the time. We had packed houses. Standing room only and none of the trappings of modern theatres. I did have a look at your theatre, had I had access to one of those I’d have made wonderful theatre.”

“So a line such as “Romeo Romeo wherefore art thou Romeo?” to the modern viewer is confusing.”

“In your vernacular, it simply means “Where the hell are you, Romeo?” You see the difference between theatre in my time and yours was that people came to hear a play not see it. As it was performed in the day and we had minimal stage props everything the audience needed to know was contained within the lines.”

“Like a radio play?”

“Yes somewhat like that.”

“Well Will we could chat all night but as time is now upon us, I’ll have to say thank you for coming in, and I hope your new play, ‘The Return of Faustus’……..

“Pardon? A new play?”

“Yes, it says so here. ‘The Return of Faustus’ by William Shakespeare.”

“Really? The works they have attributed to me. More royalties then coming my way.”

“Thanks, Will and good luck with the play.”

 

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