Saturday Mix — Lorraine 18.03.17 – Walking – Four-Sentences

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Its 4am, and I am awake and know I need to get to the bathroom.

I walk through the dark house, trip on a child’s toy and step on a dead cockroach.

My feet reel in agony and horror at what they have had to encounter.

My bladder screams at me to forget the discomfort of my feet and keep walking as its needs are far, far greater.

Written for: https://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2017/03/18/saturday-mix-lorraine-18-03-17/

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9 Responses to Saturday Mix — Lorraine 18.03.17 – Walking – Four-Sentences

  1. Lorraine says:

    Excellent four line tale — I know the bladder screaming, and the stepping on things — tho no cockroaches as yet.
    Thanks so for participating — another enjoyable submission.

  2. kim881 says:

    I’m amazed at how much you’ve squeezed in to that short trip to the loo, Michael!

  3. wordwitch88 says:

    LOL – oh the follies of the long night after hours need to pee ….

    well done in 4 lines!

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