100 Word Challenge for Grown Ups – Week#147 – Hieronymus O’Crastnickovski

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This week’s prompt: …all seven were just arguing amongst themselves…

The arguments went back and forth and after a while they become tediously petty.

The seven delegates failed to notice their assistants lying dead behind them.

The arguing over the six available parking spaces had allowed Hieronymus O’Crastnickovski, the infamous parking space official, to infiltrate the meeting taking out the assistants.

O’Crastnickovski was arch enemy number one.

He had a habit of performing dastardly deeds unnoticed.

As each delegate called upon his assistant the startling discovery was made.

Blood seeped into the carpet, death lingered in the room, hysteria erupted as Hieronymus smugly made his exit.

 

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25 Responses to 100 Word Challenge for Grown Ups – Week#147 – Hieronymus O’Crastnickovski

  1. Lyn's avatar Lyn says:

    I just love the name Hieronymus O’Crastnickovski. Obviously of Irish/Russian descent. It would have made a lot more sense if they’d all parked on the street one day a week. The carpet wouldn’t need to be cleaned, and they wouldn’t need to look for new assistants. Silly people!

  2. Loretta's avatar Loretta says:

    I’d like to see these delegates fight for parking spots at the mall during Christmas! Oh wait, I think I have! 😀

  3. mj6969's avatar mj6969 says:

    😀

  4. Absolutely love the name and the cat fight over parking spots. I’ve been in a couple myself. Wonderfully played. Love it. 🙂

  5. Blogger's avatar mandy smith says:

    Gruesome and entertaining at the same time 😀 Looking for emoticon info? https://en.support.wordpress.com/smilies/

  6. I’m still trying to say his name! Nice 100 worder Michael.

    • He comes from a very Irish International family….thanks for stopping by Jenny.

      • Irish you say? 😊

      • Yes very multi-cultural stock the O’Crastnickovski’s, in 1634 Crastnick migrated to Dublin with his then wife Ursula Kovski. Ursula died but Hieronymous was so heart broken and over the years of living in Dublin the family Irishified and added the O to their now elongated surname to become more Irish that European. Hieronymous became a family name being the name given the first born son of subsequent families. Understand now?

      • Oh my Lordy, you need to get out more! Lol said nicely ..yes I totes understand, thank you 😛

  7. Sheila McIntrye Good, Author's avatar Sheila says:

    Arguing over parking spaces – delightful!

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