http://dversepoets.com/2014/06/26/dada-daddy-dverse-meeting-the-bar/

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I worked

$260

One hour 10

I didn’t like it one bit.

Dust

Dust

Dust

Move

Move

Move

A boy impersonates Elvis!

Children ran in the hall

Excuse me

Lift,

Push,

Lug,

Shove.

Performance in black room

Criticism

Attention

French girl Colleen, went home.

Long drive

Oh what a feeling

Two months?

Can’t wait

I missed you so much today.

Hairspray.

 

 

 

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36 Responses to http://dversepoets.com/2014/06/26/dada-daddy-dverse-meeting-the-bar/

  1. MarinaSofia's avatar MarinaSofia says:

    Sounds like my upcoming summer holidays with the kids…
    That’s what I love about Dadaist poetry – leaves so much room for interpretation or not, as the case may be, as your fancy takes you.

  2. Grace's avatar Grace says:

    Sounds like a fun thing to do (Hairspray) though I read from your comment that its your first work day for the year ~ Make the best of it, smiles ~

  3. Georgia's avatar Bastet says:

    Interesting … impressionism – It certainly has a certain flow to it? Read you’re back at work … have a great year!

  4. brian miller's avatar brian miller says:

    whoa…i could use $260 an hour…ha…elvis is a fun one to impersonate…travel light french girl…hairspray pshhhhhhhhh….ozone fur balls….hey, watch the shoving….all tailed bipeds to the right, please.

  5. and so you enjoyed my friend?

  6. claudia's avatar claudia says:

    dunno why exactly but i loved the hairspray in the close…. gives it some nice flavour…smiles

  7. This felt to me like stream of consciousness poetry, which clearly fits into the whole Dadaist realm of expression. Nicely done.

  8. For some reason I hear “Money for nothing” by Dire Straits playing when I read this.. especially the video…

  9. I missed you so much today… if the above was your day then this line is even sweeter.

  10. I missed you so much today – really the most important words of the day! Well done on getting through the Dada day!

  11. A life flashing before the eyes….dada style. 🙂

  12. kaykuala h's avatar kaykuala h says:

    Seems a lot impacting on the day’s events. You have it all made with things to do. It may be indicative for the year. Good thoughts!

    Hank

  13. RoSy's avatar RoSy says:

    Sounds like a busy day…

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