Poetry Prompt 45 – Climbing – Mum?

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Steady, steady,

Hold it hold it

Move it a bit closer, closer!

NO! Too far!

Back, back, back.

Hold it, hold it

MUM?????

What?

Why are we doing this?

Just shut up, Let me concentrate

A bit more I need a bit more

You want a leg up mum?

No. Don’t be silly,

Be patient

It’s a tricky business.

Now what?

Can you move me in a bit?

That enough?

No! More!

Steady steady steady

Hold it hold it hold it

Mum?

What?

It’s a light bulb mum, a light bulb.

But I have to climb up on this chair

Let me do it mum.

I want it done today son,

Now give me a leg up.

One, two, thr……….(Thunk)

Mum?

 

Written for: http://pookypoetry.wordpress.com/2014/06/14/poetry-prompt-45-climbing/

 

 

 

 

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15 Responses to Poetry Prompt 45 – Climbing – Mum?

  1. The things mums do… The thunk says it all, very good Michael.

  2. JackieP says:

    Oops, did mum use the wrong chair? Lol Nice story, except for the thunk.

  3. PookyH says:

    ha ha! This reminds me of Tom, myself and an elderly neighbour trying to cut a bit branch off a tree outside our houses last night (it had been hit by a truck and was overhanging the road) it looked like a comedy scene and when the branch finally gave way it was with a big THUMP!

  4. Lyn says:

    okay, now let’s try that again. This time without the thunk 🙂

  5. Ahahaha…too funny. My grandmother would wait for my visit with a pile of linen to put up high high in the cabinet because I was taller than everyone in the females anyway.

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