Poetry Prompt 42 – Reprimand

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You stepped way out of line today.

Was it necessary to embarrass me as you did?

I was doing as you asked.

Why was your action warranted?

You stepped into the line I was in,

You grabbed me by the ear

You pulled me way

As if I was some misbehaving child

In front of so many

My family, my friends.

Did you have any understanding

Any inkling of how affronting that was?

I ask myself, what were you thinking?

You relish my public humiliation

You seem oblivious to its impact

That leaves me cowering inside

Unwilling to venture far from any path

Looking for ways to avoid you and public places.

How dare you behave in such ways.

Never again are you to subject me

In private or public to such an indignity.

It is time you took some responsibility

Saw me as something more than a man

To manipulate, to shape to whatever

Whim you are exercising today.

Written for: http://pookypoetry.wordpress.com/2014/06/11/poetry-prompt-42-reprimand/

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12 Responses to Poetry Prompt 42 – Reprimand

  1. Emily Page's avatar Emily Page says:

    I like the way this poem surprises the reader. All the way through until the third last line, I had assumed (rightly or wrongly) that this was written with a female voice. The surprise is all the more effective for making me challenge that assumption. Thank you.

  2. Well at least you told them in the end.

  3. JackieP's avatar JackieP says:

    Powerful read Michael. And a terrible, embarrassing incident that shouldn’t happen to anyone.

  4. PookyH's avatar PookyH says:

    I read this imagining that this was the first time you’d spoken up despite suffering this indignity multiple times. It takes huge strength to speak up x

  5. Wow! That was powerful and could feel it was a way overdo reprimand…good on you! Oliana

  6. RoSy's avatar RoSy says:

    Enough is enough!

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