Poetry Prompt 19 – Rhyme and Reason – How to Create an Underclass

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Last week I watched you, dear Treasurer

Play with the lives of the poor

As you showed them the door

To a new poverty never seen before.

 

I had to endure your words

Get out of your seat and earn or learn

What callousness I thought for you to yearn

To make the lives of the young so termed.

 

Their worth to be judged in economic woes

No work, no help, no monetary gain

You are just going to prolong the pain

Creating an underclass that’s plain.

 

So those of you so well off

Best be careful when comes the day

To cast a vote they’ll make you pay

They’ll send you packing when they have their say.

 

Written for: http://pookypoetry.wordpress.com/2014/05/19/poetry-prompt-19-rhyme-and-reason/

 

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23 Responses to Poetry Prompt 19 – Rhyme and Reason – How to Create an Underclass

  1. wbdeejay's avatar wbdeejay says:

    Yes, I saw this too. It seems terrible for a great many people.

  2. wbdeejay's avatar wbdeejay says:

    Yes, Adelaide ordinarily. Although at the moment I am visiting my sister in London.

  3. Lyn's avatar Lyn says:

    I think Big Ears and Noddy are in a bit of trouble when it comes to the popularity stakes. “Pensioners will only pay for the first 10 visits each year.” Okay, Mr Treasure, what about those who have chronic heart conditions and have to see their doctor every 4-6 weeks? That means they’ll be paying all the time. Sorry Michael, don’t know why I’m sounding off here. You’re not Little Joe. I’m in the middle of writing him a letter 😉

    • Go for it Lyn, I think they are going to have trouble getting a lot of it thru the senate from what I heard tonight. It’s disgraceful some of the measures they are proposing, but then again if you understand their brand of politics, the rich get richer and the poor get poorer. And they’ve done that again.

  4. Charlie Alford's avatar Charlie Alford says:

    I really felt this. I felt the unease in your words that we in Oz have all been feeling. The words “new poverty” and “underclass” accurately describing the Australia under this government…

  5. Interesting write my friend.

  6. PookyH's avatar PookyH says:

    This was a new topic in me, not being an Aussie… it sounds like a very uncomfortable situation, the rhyme works really well – I was intrigued about where people would go with this prompt.

  7. JackieP's avatar JackieP says:

    It seems like the governments everywhere are only for the rich, as in Canada they feel the same and the states too. Time for a revolution!!

  8. RoSy's avatar RoSy says:

    Politics…*()&(^&^%$%^#$#@!

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