Poetry Prompt 16 – School Days – Recollections

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School days were fool days in many ways

I was brought up in a sheltered world

Reading and writing was not something I learnt at home

But its mysteries taught to me in school.

A school beset with its own odd culture

Of nuns who ruled the universe in my reckoning

Strange women wrapped in black habits

Their faces and hands all we ever saw.

Women whom to us lacked compassion

Were mean and hard with no sense of humour

Who were quick to flog you for any indiscretion.

Only Sister Annunciata in Year Six

Resembled a human being.

In Year Five Mother DePaul a sad old cranky woman

Would belt you if you couldn’t answer a question.

The class kept tally of who received the most.

I would defy her written orders to

‘COME TO ME’.

 

Schools were factories, in one end and spat out the other

That real learning occurred was accidental I think.

The naturally smart did well

The rest of us laboured through maths

Wrote awkwardly, spelt terribly,

But we knew our times tables

Recite our catechism

And attend Mass for fear of mortal sin.

It was a time when anxiety ruled our world,

Nuns with big sticks had wicked tongues,

Where one size was made to fit all.

 

I spent twelve years in school,

In hindsight not so enjoyable,

Then forty-three more enjoyable years

On the other side trying to leave

My impressionable charges

With some good memory.

 

My life has been spent in classrooms.

Is it any wonder I don’t miss it

At all?

 

Written for: http://pookypoetry.wordpress.com/2014/05/16/poetry-prompt-16-school-days/

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30 Responses to Poetry Prompt 16 – School Days – Recollections

  1. Charlie Alford's avatar Charlie Alford says:

    I like the idea of schools being factories – an accurate description of how it felt.

  2. morgaine620's avatar morgaine620 says:

    shame that nuns were so often so cruel. I wonder what the man they supposedly follow so closely would think about their behaviour. Not at all “Let the little children come to me and do not hinder them……” Their behaviour is a kind of hindrance as well as it probably stopped many of the kids as adults to experience a life enforcing spirituality

    • Thank you Bee, that’s a great comment. What I am aware of is that I am sure my teachers all thought they were doing a fair job, they just weren’t always very smart at it, they tended to go through the motions. Thankfully I was motivated to learn by myself.

      • morgaine620's avatar morgaine620 says:

        I agree that is the problem in most cases. They believe it is for the best and it is hard for them to understand that it might have a total different effect on the children in their care.

        I grew up in Germany and was in a state school so I never experienced that kind of school environment. I loved school having a hard time at home and I loved to learn. Especially English which helped me a lot to settle in Great Britain.

        Even though there have been some kids who just needed to wind me up because I have red hair. Luckily my mother had too and she said to me:” Soon they all dye their hair your colour and you can safe that money!” :-). Hope you have a lovely weekend ~ Bee

      • Thanks Bee, funny what our mothers said to us isn’t it. If I was feeling unwell and didn’t want to go to school she would say ‘ you’ll be right once you get going’. I hated hearing that as I knew she would be right, and she always was. You have a good day too.

      • morgaine620's avatar morgaine620 says:

        🙂 exactly. I hated it as well as my class mates could be quite mean but it somehow helped too….

  3. MarinaSofia's avatar MarinaSofia says:

    The best thing about schools (and I changed quite a few of them across countries) were the friends I made. A couple of teachers that I’m still friends with now, and a few dear friends scattered across the globe. That’s the legacy of school. It sounds, however, like your memories were much more negative.

    • Sadly my teachers were not the sort to forge any relationship with. In high school I played some sport with a few but I did make friends one of who I had dinner with this week. I think that having been a teacher I saw the flaws in my own education, but I do know many of my teachers did the best they could.

  4. CC Champagne's avatar CC Champagne says:

    School was basically my one constant growing up, so even if I changed schools and class-mates quite a lot it was still kind of a safe haven for me. It was the one thing I could rely on to be there without rules changing on me. I was good in school, studied well and was friendly with the teachers. Which of course didn’t really make me popular with my class-mates… Anyhow, enough nostalgia, what I wanted to say was regardless of everything else I believe in the value of a good teacher. That is what your piece made me think about.

  5. Blogger's avatar Mandy says:

    Oh Michael, what a wonderful memory of school days with the nuns! Many from “back then” will relate. Nowadays things have changed–even when they wear traditional habits they can be found outside running the bases with the kids at recess. Lol. I enjoyed this a lot! (Oh, and my daughters teacher, Sister Carol Marie dressed like a giant pumpkin at halloween 🙂 )

  6. JackieP's avatar JackieP says:

    Ah, school, not a whole lot of good memories for me either I’m afraid. But Michael, now you are retired from school and can do as you please. That has to be a great feeling! No more school! Except for the school of life and that one can me fabulous.

  7. What a sad tale and how horrific the conditions that some kids had to endure. Thankfully, that is all behind you and you taught how teachers should have taught. My school days are a bit of a blur, possibly a good thing 😉

  8. PookyH's avatar PookyH says:

    Do you really not miss it?

    I’m sure your students have far happier memories x

  9. RoSy's avatar RoSy says:

    I remember liking school. I wasn’t too fond of the social experiences – especially in HS. I was an awkward teenager. If only I had an older sibling to help lead the way. Looking back – I managed pretty ok on my own – I think.

    • I can appreciate your comment RoSy. I had an older brother five years older than me so I was at school pretty much on my own. It was the learning I liked, not the place.

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