Poetry Prompt 9 – Open With a Question – Mountain Trekking?

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Did you really mean that?

I don’t believe you did

For you have cut me to the quick

Shattered all belief.

I was already to join you

Paid my deposit

Organised work leave

And you spring this surprise on me?

I am feeling quite the fool

I didn’t see it coming

Though when I think back on it

It’s really no surprise.

You led me to believe

Set me up so perfectly

They say if it’s too good

Then most probably it isn’t.

But why her, what has she to offer?

I know you’ve been old friends

But I didn’t think, in a million years

You’d lay this on me today.

I thought I was beautiful,

You said so often enough.

I thought I was wonderful

As you texted everyday.

I thought I was your life partner

As we promised just last week.

So every plan is out the window

Every dream now dashed

I’ll watch you both leave hand in hand

I’ll consider revenge, seek restitution.

I hope it rains as never before,

Mountain trekking can be fraught

With mudslides, land slides,

Volcanoes, outlaw gangs with knives,

Karma may yet come to visit.

So as I lick my wounds

And contemplate my future

I can only hope that fate

Will step in at some point.

 

 Written for: http://pookypoetry.wordpress.com/2014/05/09/poetry-prompt-9-open-with-a-question/

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15 Responses to Poetry Prompt 9 – Open With a Question – Mountain Trekking?

  1. Karma a wonderful thing, perhaps when he sees her a la natural smeared in mud from their trekking adventure, he will know that he took the wrong one.

  2. Larry's avatar Larry says:

    Ugh. This one depresses me. Vindictiveness is such an ugly trait.

  3. JackieP's avatar JackieP says:

    Well, this one is something Michael. But when one was lied to and cheated on, a person tends to think this way till they realize they are better off without the cheat. Karma will win in the end, it always does. Just takes time.

  4. charlypriest's avatar charlypriest says:

    That was a long and beautiful poem, as always really.

  5. This is really a great poem, Michael. You get in the heart of the cheated woman very nicely. It is also open to interpretation…the lovers could all be women. You are really a great writer!

  6. RoSy's avatar RoSy says:

    So sad when one is led to believe one thing & then hit & knocked out with just the opposite. Why do people feel it ok to play with others feelings? 😦

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