Poem 111 – Prattling

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Just today my dearest friend

Tells me I prattle well.

That my prattling reveals who I am,

That I should do more of it.

After all a good prattle can be very cathartic.

 

And it’s Monday, I look at the space on my page

I wonder what words might be next

Do I try to be philosophical?

Do I speak of love, hope, resolution?

 

Cause my mind wanders in circles

The same thoughts, the same place

How lucky I am in so many ways

I live in a land of milk and honey

I am loved by those who know me

I feel treasured and so fortunate to be alive right now.

 

Keep in mind I would like to write a literary piece

One that stands the test of time

Not the mindless ditties I write day to day.

Discussions of intellectual rigour.

The metaphysical, if I actually understood it.

To sit in my backyard and thereby

Write my observations of nature

The eco system I live within.

Emulating previous ‘masters’

Who somehow got away with it.

Delve into the search for constancy

Happiness, love and endless delight.

Connecting man, his world, his inner soul

A philosophical treatise, an academic revelation.

Sit back all smug and important

Have other writers nod in my direction

There goes that man, the one of substance.

 

In case you wonder so do I?

Whatever all that may mean.

Rather I like to prattle

Go on about stuff

Some important to me, some not

Be whimsical, humourous,

Trite even dare I say it.

Discuss emotions, trivial issues

The cost of a loaf of bread

Apples more so than pears.

Come with me

Explore as I do

I may not always make a lot of sense

But it’s my mind, I like where it sits.

 

Each day as confusing as this may sound

I had teachers who would say  ‘yes but if you’…’if only’

‘Could you?’….’You know’….’think more laterally’….

What ever that meant.

I write my words my way

There is little point in me writing any other way

I live with a language that gushes forth.

I marvel at your words,

You are more articulate, thoughtful

Structured, meaningful, precise

Mine meander veer in various directions

Often little intention, understanding

My direction changes as the wind.

I use you as my mentor,

We all need a mentor,

Some use me as a mentor

I find that flattering,

But I do as I can…

After all I may need them

Sooner rather than later.

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25 Responses to Poem 111 – Prattling

  1. JackieP's avatar JackieP says:

    Pretty good prattling there Michael. I think your friend was right 🙂

  2. Friends often tell us the truth, now don’t they.. I think you prattled on very well Michael and I wouldn’t expect anything less.

  3. D.J.W.'s avatar thesewordsiwrite2012 says:

    I enjoyed this; pretty touching.

  4. Linda Vernon's avatar Linda Vernon says:

    Michael!! You’ve said exactly what I feel about my writing. Exactly! And like you, I am so grateful to be alive right now and to have the opportunity to be who I am and say what I want for no other reason than because it strikes my fancy. How delicious it is, Michael, and how well you’ve expressed it! 😀

    • Thank you so much Linda. It must be the age we are at where we feel we have something to say and time to say it and maybe those who read our wisdom will benefit. If not their lose I say. I thought your last Gregory post was a perfect example of a learned prattle if ever I saw one. I am sure you are proud of your efforts.

  5. RoSy's avatar RoSy says:

    Ok…I had to look up the word prattle.
    And – yes – you prattle well! 😀

  6. Well I think you’re brilliant Michael just as you are =)

  7. I really enjoyed this… we all want to create something that is meaningful.
    and we can all learn from each other…. great thoughts, larger than prattling!

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