Haibun Thinking: Week 3 – Angel

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I feel wretched. The news has devastated me. I want to curl up and disappear but I know life doesn’t work like that.  With all eyes on me, shame and guilt written all over my face, I stood before them hearing their disgust. I had to run, get away, find this hole, a place of sanctuary, bury myself well away from the derision they are hurling my way.

Here I can take stock, listen to you, take in what you say away from the raucous taunts that I have been subjected to.

I know you are here, always here, sitting on my shoulder, my angel of love. You protect, you stick up for me, I know its you speaking through me when life goes awry. Right now its you I need, your shoulder to lean on, your words reassuring me it wasn’t my fault, I acted in good faith, I am ok.

Your love is unconditional, embrace me.

 

shame and derision

heart far greater than all life

love enfolds me

Written for: http://haibunthinking.wordpress.com/2014/02/04/haibun-thinking-week-3-february-4th-2014/

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37 Responses to Haibun Thinking: Week 3 – Angel

  1. Alastair's avatar Al says:

    Wow. I love that.

    You can feel the pain and then the angel wrapping her arms around him for comfort. Well written.

    And well done for being first for a hat-trick 😉

  2. Lovely. A lot of emotion is shared with the reader.

  3. I wonder what it is he did, regardless the angle wings were there to protect and comfort and that it is a good thing. Nicely penned.

  4. Anja's avatar Anja says:

    🙂 Another Angel tale…..they seem to be all around us.

  5. niasunset's avatar niasunset says:

    So beautiful dear Michael, captured me. Thank you, love, nia

  6. When I first started reading your beautiful poem Philip Seymour Hoffman immediately sprang to mind…..it is a sad day in the US and the world, for we have truly lost another great actor. I loved your contribution this week. It speaks volumes to me… 🙂

    • Thank you Courtney, I didn’t know about Philip Seymour Hoffman until I read this comment. I hadn’t noticed it on the news. So yes a sad day indeed. Thank you for your comment, I am glad, I guess, that it triggered that association.

  7. firstlastname123's avatar Tina J.S says:

    w-o-w , I love it! Amazing written!

  8. Brenda Davis Harsham's avatar Brenda says:

    I love it, so wonderful the idea of an enfolding personal angel.

  9. helenmidgley's avatar helenmidgley says:

    That was beautifully written 🙂

  10. Jules's avatar julespaige says:

    Angels come in all shapes and sizes. Sometimes hidden within ourselves…

    Thanks for your visit and kind words. ~Jules

  11. paulscribbles's avatar paulscribbles says:

    Powerful imagery. Good to have that kind of angel close by at times like that.

  12. Georgia's avatar Bastet says:

    So moving..I can feel the embarassment and pain: such a wonderful catharsis the vision of your loving angel!

  13. Suzanne's avatar Suzanne says:

    It is wonderful when the angels come close and hold us in our hours of deepest need. Your haibun is powerful and moving.

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