D’Verse – Banish Boredom: Rx: Verbs!

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It’s midnight

Silence,

Save for

Fingers

Tapping languidly on

Keyboards

Heat permeating

Humidity dripping

Elusive sleep

Tossing and turning,

Will I ever embrace

Peaceful, long sought after

Sleep?

Bleary bloodshot eyes

Salute the morning

My now delirious mind

Imagines far off

Cooler climes

Friendly faces

Greetings warm.

Words flying back and forth

Images created

Drawn in my mind,

Ideas exchanged

Pretentious drivel?

Thoughts explored

You existentialist you.

Your mind exercised

Experiential?

You nod,

You curse

You laugh

The time well

Used

Productive even.

You smile in

Your corner of

The world

Content in the

Knowledge

Your words now have meaning.

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54 Responses to D’Verse – Banish Boredom: Rx: Verbs!

  1. Gabriella's avatar Gabriella says:

    Interesting to see your creative process, Michael! I rarely type on the computer after midnight. At that time, I might type on my iPad.

    • I have an laptop, its easy to sit in bed and work away from the desktop. Ipad is ok but I prefer the laptop. We all write in our own ways don’t we, thanks so much for reading Gabriella.

  2. Good use of the short lines… works very well.. Here it has been the opposite.. had problems heating up … so we had 15 C indoors…and I slept better than ever…

  3. Liz RS's avatar Raven Spirit says:

    Oh dear … I know this great “lack of sleep” well.

  4. Mary's avatar Mary says:

    At least, in the age of computer communication, one has people one can communicate in the middle of the night. There is always a friendly ‘face’ somewhere that one can reach via the internet. I so well understand the idea of “words flying back and forth” with people in other corners of the world!!

  5. JoshuaRobertson's avatar robertsonwrites says:

    Story of my life!

  6. Very descriptive on how we/you are suffering ~ nice bunch of verbs too 🙂

  7. I too find sleep elusive, darn it. My words are still all jumbled . . . yours definitely have meaning.

  8. alan1704's avatar alan1704 says:

    Bloodshot eyes i know them only too well, I love how this just cascades like the tiredness that envelopes. Well done.

  9. Kathy Reed's avatar kkkkaty1 says:

    Worse than insomnia is restless leg syndrome…in that respect you are lucky…enjoyed your poem!

  10. brian miller's avatar brian miller says:

    nice…hey you might as well make it productive when sleep is illusive…usually i am reading or writing when i cant sleep…to get my mind off whatever it is that is keeping me awake….it does feel good when our words have meaning…

    • Thanks Brian being a teacher there is plenty to keep us awake. And yes it does give us a good feeling to know our words do make sense to those who read them. Thanks again for your comment.

  11. coalkissed's avatar coalkissed says:

    Sleepless nights can be the bane of existence at times! It is nice that in this day and age we do have friends all over the world who are up. Kind of like the whole “it’s 5 o’clock” somewhere 🙂 I liked your use of brevity in your lines, yet you painted a well formed image for us. I hope you find sleep in the upcoming nights 🙂

    • Dear ?? What an intriguing name you have….Coal, thank you for your comment, as I take prednisone and it does good things but it also brings you wide awake at 2am I counter it nowadays with another little tablet, I still wake up but I am able to get back to sleep. I like that idea of it’s always 5 o’clock somewhere…lol…must remember that one.

  12. naramalone's avatar naramalone says:

    It sounds like it all came together for you once you were asleep on your feet. I like getting up to write in the wee hours before I’m all the way awake. Nice verb choices.

  13. This feels all too familiar to me. You’ve chose such appropriate verbs and verb derivatives in this. Thanks for joining us.

  14. Lyn's avatar Lyn says:

    I found myself nodding as I read this, Michael. ~sigh~ turn the fan up a notch, get another glass of cold water, grumble at the dog who insists on sleeping on your feet.
    SA, VIC and NSW all had horrendous days yesterday – not going to be much better today either.
    We’re expecting 39C for the next few days. At least it’s going to be fairly cool for them in Brisbane for the second one day cricket match against England, they’re expecting a relatively cool 29C.

  15. claudia's avatar claudia says:

    writing through the night and so as if to be right there where the pen takes you… i like getting lost in the writing process… well penned

  16. Interesting write. But sleeplessness can sometimes open up the doors of imagination which would have remained shut otherwise.
    -HA

  17. Georgia's avatar Bastet says:

    Lovely Micheal…I can feel that heat though here we freeze, and know that sensation of wanting to sleep…and yet, it’s such a wonder as the doors of communications open and you find yourself in that special world where insomnia is no longer insomnia but a boon because you’ve shared something of your self and received a wonderful gift in return… love your poem!

  18. Anja's avatar Anja says:

    ha Good poem but I will also say, stop complaining about the heat. You deal with the polar vortex 🙂

  19. Cool description of the drive behind the creative process!! 🙂 🙂

  20. Oh I like these short lines..lots if emphasis on the word like that. I dont take to heat much either…hv to put air conditioner in one room at least. I prefer the cold. But in your disconfort your muse paid you a nice visit.

  21. hypercryptical's avatar hypercryptical says:

    I know this – but mostly it is of my own making. I put off going to bed – just a few more minutes to write this or that (which becomes hours) or one more site to read…
    Anna :o]

  22. Love how staccato lines punctuate meaning. Nicely done!

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