Poem 84

woman-looking-in-mirror

When you look in a mirror

What do you see?

Is it someone you know?

Someone you like?

Do you cringe at this sight?

Do you wonder who is this person?

Most days I know I do.

I am an imperfect person

Who despite my best intentions

Will never be more than what I physically am.

But that image is not the me I know

The me I know lives inside my body

Safe from prying eyes

Content in whom he is

Proud of what he has done.

My face tells me who I am

The body is what I feed, too much of,

To keep my face on top.

My face is my mask to the world

For behind it is the real me.

You can look if you like

You can dip your mind into mine

Have a look around

See what happens at any given time

Hopefully it is not too scary

Hopefully like so many

You don’t run off in,

Is it fear or boredom?

For I know I am capable of both

Though that notion bothers me.

I am who I am

These days you can press delete

Block

Ignore

But that would disappoint me

As I think I am more than that

I have a lot to offer.

There is within me

An untapped

Reserve of love.

So be patient with me

I am flawed

But I’m ok.

So what do you see?

When you look into the mirror?

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23 Responses to Poem 84

  1. Cool poem Michael – I think we will all relate to that!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  2. RoSy's avatar RoSy says:

    I Love this!
    It took me a while to see the me that I am. And – glad I finally did. πŸ™‚

  3. We all look at ourselves and criticise what we see before us in the mirror, underneath the exterior – our shell – lies so much more. We are flawed, none of us being perfect, but it is only through age and wisdom that we realise and can accept who we are.
    When I look in the mirror, I see everything going south ~ but I see determination in my eyes, a laughter from my soul and love in my heart πŸ™‚ Nicely nicely done my good friend.

  4. Anja's avatar Anja says:

    After the holidays I think we all are looking in the mirror and seeing more of ourselves. lol Great poem.

  5. Lyn's avatar Lyn says:

    So much more than the surface words. Like the person we see in the mirror. The one others see, but not the real person who hides behind the reflection the mirror shows.

    • Yes it was an exploration of that idea of what you see may not necessarily be what you are or what you get…..we are three dimensional beings after all. Thanks Lyn for that comment, good one.

  6. Fantastic introspective work Michael =) I have body dysmorphia so I try not to spend too much time looking in the mirror because I know I will pull myself apart. Usually I make stupid faces when I look in the mirror and that helps me not to get into the serious critical frame of mind

  7. Charlie Alford's avatar Charlie Alford says:

    I really enjoyed this and could relate to your words. I particularly like the reference to looking up – if only more of us would these days…

    • Thanks Charlie for your comment. I hope you can visit again. Great to find another Aussie blogger, there don’t appear to be too many. I met another good one while I was in Melbourne. Thank you for following my blog. Please call again.

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