My chosen style is – Getting Tight in there – 55 word poem
my journey was long
moments of hesitation
doubt
it would be my pleasure you said
your door,
welcoming
I knocked
deep breath
relax
face to face
smile
embrace
laugh
talk
discovery
engaged with you
time flies when having fun
It’s late
do you have to go just yet?
unsure
come my love
stay
stay.
Written for:
http://dversepoets.com/2014/01/09/meeting-the-bar-looking-back-looking-ahead/
Morpethroad 
A lot said with few words 🙂
Thank you Anja, only 55 words, not a lot of description you can go into…
You did it very well
Awww thank you kind lady.
there was an urgency in your lines
Thank you so much, urgency is the name of the game you might say when there are only 55 words involved.
You could have included this in the Nerudan Odes prompt too … smiles … a form I have become very fond of since it only has one rule; short lines. I love the brevity of your style here; you say everything that needs to be said, but only what needs to be said.
Thank you so much Tony, you can only say what’s necessary in this many lines. I appreciate your comment. Must look up Nerudan Odes…
You gave us a great snapshot of a moment in time in just 55 words…wow! This is wonderful.
Oh thank you so much, that is a very generous comment.
Please call again….
Why use two hundred words when fifty-five will suffice. I doubt it could have been written any better without bordering on the verbose.
Ha I take that as a compliment Lyn…..56 words would be verbose I agree.
Very good poem, Michael! It makes me wonder about the before and after.
One of life’s mysteries Gabriella. Lovely to read your comment. I think there is another 55 before, and maybe 55 after….
Powerful and full of passion.
Thank you Alan I appreciate your comments.
Certainly nerudian as well a real story in just 55…
Thank you Bjorn I appreciate as always you reading my posts.
What an invitation
What an invitation, and who could refuse!
Thank you Mary, ha, hmmm…what can I say.
That is so sweet; I must try my hand at saying more in less words. Less is best they say:)
Thank you Oliana, its a challenge to try and say something worthwhile in 55 words. Thank you again for reading and your comment.
this is sweet!! 🙂
Thank you so much, please call again.
Thank you so much Mohana, I apprecaite you reading my poem. Please call again.
I like how you begin with hesitation, doubt and end with the certainty of stay…a nice emotional evolution in 55 words.
Thank you so much Ronald, I appreciate you reading my work.
Sounds like a sweet memorable moment. 😉
One would hope so. Thanks RoSy.
Lovely – hope you stayed.
Anna :o]
Well Anna, one hopes she/he did.
I love this. You have conveyed so much emotion in so few words … in one of my favorite poetic forms.
Thank you Raven. I am happy you were able to connect with my words. Yes I like this form also. Makes you work hard to find the right words.
A novel’s worth of story in 55 words – well done!! 🙂 🙂
Thanks Helen, love the challenge of writing in this way.
a beautiful poem..conveys emotions very well
Thank you so much.
You have narrated the story in 55 beautiful words. Really enjoyed reading it.
Thank you for your comment please call again.
to me – the allure of an affair – you are AMAZING!!!! 😉 (and of course I only say this as you are sitting next to me …. let’s start some gossip!
Gossip? That I stayed at your house is gossip? Ahmmmmm you cook very well!!!
well thank you kind Sir, very nice of you to say 🙂
Only gossip I can think of
Yeah well I may do a post, still not in the writing mood though woah? Is me chuckle
It starts off unsure, settles, and well, has a happy ending 🙂 That’s a lot for 55 words!
Thanks Margaret…..I appreciate your comment. Yes it is a lot isn’t it….brevity works well some times..