Poem 76 – Old Muddie

Orroral_Valley_walk_old_homestead

An old stoneware pot

Lays discarded in one corner

A half carved doll

The product of one short

Moment of creativity,

Lays discarded wrapped in a cage of cobwebs.

 

Old Muddie’s boots, worn and in need of stitching

Serve as a reminder of frugalness.

He survived, one day at a time,

His boots now laying on a floor

Littered with past projects, attempts to be productive

As his faculties succumbed to age.

 

A one-bedroom shack, corrugated iron roof

No insulation, an open fire the only warmth,

When the icy winds blew, and frost inches thick

Descended upon his meagre abode

He would fold himself in a blanket

His beard with icicles on the coldest mornings.

 

His Spartan home, a cushion on a wooden seat, luxury

A new blanket, a free meal, the greetings of children

The material and spiritual that sustained him.

We worried about him, aging, becoming frailer

Each winter a challenge, he was hardened

You don’t live 90 years not knowing survival

 

One July night, a vicious storm, heavy snow,

His old roof, collapsed, his leg trapped

His body exposed one time too many

He lay there alone, sunrise found him, frozen.

We buried him, half a dozen who cared,

Now at rest, his shack, his past, soon gone.

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19 Responses to Poem 76 – Old Muddie

  1. Anja's avatar Anja says:

    Oh this is very good!!!!! I really like. It did make me think of my great-grandparents home in Kentucky. Oh I loved that old home, it was slanted and everything. Was condemned as soon as they died. 😦

  2. LFFL's avatar LFFL says:

    What a great picture!

  3. This is incredible. You are very talented! Is this based on a personal relationship or experience?

  4. Wonderful -sad, but also defiantly hopeful in its own way too!! 🙂 🙂

  5. It’s a great piece of hardships almost forgotten now.. the way one used to live, and how the end would come sooner or later.

  6. RoSy's avatar RoSy says:

    I enjoy the vivid images in your writing & how you portray a story!

  7. Michael, the photo helped but your words were of beauty, hardship, sadness, determination,loneliness and how some of us would be happy to spend out lives far from the madding crowd at times too. Very well written Michael, I enjoyed this a great deal.

  8. Wow Michael the imagery is so vivid. Jenny expressed it well the stubbornness, the strength, the loneliness, and ultimate the fragility of all life beautiful

  9. What a sad story! Yet we feel the pride of this resilient man as well. Nicely done.

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