Poem 41

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I watch you across a room

You strut,

You flout,

You don’t care

About the boy in the corner.

He doesn’t exist

He has no opinion.

You care little to pass a second with him

But he watches,

Not fascinated,

But curious

Alive to your voice.

You laugh and joke

You seek attention

Any will do

Any to stem the tide

Of introspection

And discovery.

You don’t want to know what’s in there

So you maintain your mask

Until a moment occurs

Where truth prevails

Your shame.

You want to hide

And you notice the boy

The only one not laughing,

Not party to the ridicule

The humiliation.

He fumbles an hello

You wonder who is this boy

Who doesn’t, who isn’t?

Who looks into your eyes

Takes your hand

And melts your mind.

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12 Responses to Poem 41

  1. oh how I do so love that last line 🙂 think the boy in the corner did melt her mind – if not her heart.

  2. Thank Jenny, I would hope so. I actually like this one, its the romantic in me I think…

  3. That’s lovely!! A perfect moment of recognition and connection perfectly described! 🙂

  4. RoSy's avatar RoSy says:

    It takes a special chemistry to capture someones attention like that.

  5. Gabriella's avatar Gabriella says:

    Beautiful poem Michael! I find that last line just perfect!

  6. PookyH's avatar PookyH says:

    Oooh you’ve really got me imagining this mind-melting boy!

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