Poem 40

war

Bombs whistle, explode

Ear deafening

Deafened.

Staring no where

Looking in and seeing

Change

Destruction

Bits gone

Self no more.

Replaced by

An automation.

I eat, I piss, I shit

I never sleep.

No words describe the horror

No words will play in my head

My last letter

Of love and home

‘Mother it’s hell over here.’

All gone

Lost.

Now the pain of living

Fate worse than death

Everyday a reminder

Of what was

Never will be.

What will they say?

What will they make of me?

Now damaged

Stained

Emotionless

Devoid of life, of living.

Locked inside this body

No direction

No nothing.

This poem was written in response to a study of War Literature. Mainly the poetry of World War One.

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13 Responses to Poem 40

  1. Very powerful I am sure this is exactly how some of the war wounded would have felt, so tragic!! Well done!! 🙂 🙂

  2. Anja's avatar Anja says:

    My life has been surrounded by those who have been sent to war and past veterans. Echoes many things I have heard from them. Very powerful.

  3. Paloma's avatar jrosenberry1 says:

    Even now … people don’t really consider the amount of pain and suffering that is hidden deep within the word “wounded”. Lives changed forever … so much pain … and the physical pain is bad enough but it’s just the tip of the iceberg. Beautifully written.

    BTW – do you prefer to be called Tom? Tommy?

  4. RoSy's avatar RoSy says:

    A lot of sadness in this. I can’t even begin to imagine…

  5. ..Mother it’s hell over here…this line stuck in my throat. Beautifully and sadly expressed Michael.

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