The challenge this week is to write about: The Holiday
Early morning, packed, lunches made, excitement mounting.
After weeks of planning, we are off.
Toilet stops and games in the car.
Mum and dad singing. Thank goodness for headphones.
The air of expectation rising.
This ride and that.
The final turn. Everyone leaning forward.
The deserted carpark.
Big sign.
Closed for cleaning.
Written for: http://sachablack.co.uk/2017/07/12/writepiration-124-52-weeks-in-52-words-week-28/
What a letdown! (Not your writing, but the anticipation of the trip dashed by the “closed for cleaning” sign.)
It actually happened to a mate of mine, family all loaded up, long trip…then nothing, but a laugh later, not at the time…
Yeah, I bet there wasn’t much to laugh at at the time.
Oh man! What a disappointment!
Certainly was😊
Serious Bummer!
Certainly was.
😦
oh man, your poor friends. It happened to me too once on a holiday as a kid! it’s funny afterwards but definitely not at the time!
No such a disappointment….