Writespiration #124 52 Weeks in 52 Words Week 28 – Holiday

The challenge this week is to write about:  The Holiday


Early morning, packed, lunches made, excitement mounting.

After weeks of planning, we are off.

Toilet stops and games in the car.

Mum and dad singing. Thank goodness for headphones.

The air of expectation rising.

This ride and that.

The final turn. Everyone leaning forward.

The deserted carpark.

Big sign.

Closed for cleaning.


Written for: http://sachablack.co.uk/2017/07/12/writepiration-124-52-weeks-in-52-words-week-28/

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10 Responses to Writespiration #124 52 Weeks in 52 Words Week 28 – Holiday

  1. Fandango says:

    What a letdown! (Not your writing, but the anticipation of the trip dashed by the “closed for cleaning” sign.)

  2. Ritu says:

    Oh man! What a disappointment!

  3. Sacha Black says:

    oh man, your poor friends. It happened to me too once on a holiday as a kid! it’s funny afterwards but definitely not at the time!

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