FFfAW Challenge-February 14, 2017 – An Unwritten Law


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The unwritten law of the trip was that what happened on tour stayed on tour. All was going well. A night out in the city, the enjoyment of the local cuisine, the sights and sounds of a city so far from home.

Then they arrived. At first the sound in the distance of motor bikes coming up the mall. The closer they came the more deafening the sound. We stood on the street kerb and watched as they came to where we were standing and roared past only to see the leader turn and they circle back in front of us.

My friend Elyse was captivated. The leader pulled up beside her, she mounted his bike and they rode off leaving me and our party dumbfounded.

The next morning a blushing Elyse arrived back at out hotel. She said nothing. We wondered, but when questioned she reminded us of our unwritten law.


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31 Responses to FFfAW Challenge-February 14, 2017 – An Unwritten Law

  1. Lorraine says:

    Those unwritten laws will get you every time! Betcha she had a good story too.

  2. Jade M. Wong says:

    What stays on tour happens on tour eh? I bet Elyse will remember this particular tour for quite some time 😉

  3. Su says:

    🙂 Good take on the prompt.. LOL

  4. michael1148humphris says:

    Nicely done, with depth and intrigue.

  5. Iain Kelly says:

    The challenge is to use the next prompt to tell us Elyse’s story. Nicely written.

  6. Joyfrida says:

    Well, what happens in Vegas… I enjoyed the tale 😀

  7. Sounds like Elyse might have done some hanky panky! Love the analogy that is similar to Las Vegas, Nevada, “What goes on here, stays here,” Lovely story, Michael. I enjoyed reading it!

  8. Very secretive 🙂 But you have to obey those unwritten rules!

  9. willowdot21 says:

    Oh! Lucky girl!! 😊😋

  10. James says:

    Good girls like bad boys.

  11. mandibelle16 says:

    Sort of rude of the friend to leave her friends, but I guess her knight in black leather arrived for the night. What happens, stays . . .

  12. What happens in Vegas, stays in Vegas 😉

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