Moral Mondays: “Look, don’t touch”


Brenda Fawn was the most beautiful girl I knew. She was a class ahead of me at school and to me she was perfection.

That she was older than me meant she would never have looked my way and why would she when she attracted so much attention from the older boys.

She played tennis at the same club as me and I’d see her there on weekends in her tennis skirt showing off her beautifully made legs all sun tanned and powerful.

My undying love for her was from a distance, the only touching was with myself.


Written for:

This entry was posted in Uncategorized, Writing prompt and tagged , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink.

12 Responses to Moral Mondays: “Look, don’t touch”

  1. Nortina S. says:

    I have to admit this guy sounds kind of creepy, haha! Better to touch himself than Brenda, though. That first crush sure makes us do some crazy things!

  2. Lynn Love says:

    I didn’t necessarily think he was weird – just a young man in the throws of lust / love, frustrated over his unrequited desires. Pretty normal, really. Great take on the prompt, Michael 🙂

  3. Jenn says:

    Reminds me of the movie Fast Times At Ridgemont High

  4. mandibelle16 says:

    Lol. Kind of funny. Yes better to admire from a far then to be called a stalker. Well done on the moral 🙂

  5. KL Caley says:

    Well done, Michael. I think you captured that crazy teenage lust perfectly – the poor lad! KL ❤

Please feel free to comment, I appreciate your thoughts.

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out /  Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s