https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zc8hbSM1zVo&list=PLnG56ODjnHyIcALeFlZQozuHldfLzwzgB
Can you read my mind?
Do you know what lurks
And festers beneath this mortal visage?
My nights are taken with memory
Of you in my bed
Together we were as one.
We played as lovers
Long carefree hours
Oblivious to the world outside
Be it rain hail or snow
We couldn’t have cared
For with you I felt whole.
Can you read my mind?
Can you imagine the pain
The torture of knowing you are gone
That I now sit in the midst of a void
Feelings and emotions escape me
I know nothing, want nothing
You have ruined me.
Can you read my mind?
Comprehend the damage you have instilled
My psyche punctured through with betrayal
You have left me to wallow
In the mire of what is a pretence.
If I see you my heart will skip a beat
Pound in my chest with both desire
And a loathing I never knew existed.
Ours was a love you promised to honour
Not discard because I no longer
Delivered the affection you thought you deserved.
There were always two of us
And that will surprise you,
Such is your immaturity.
Childlike you have taken your bat and gone home.
I should be celebrating our love
Not wishing you dead
So rot in hell.
Written for: https://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2016/02/12/music-prompt-29-read-my-mind-by-the-killers/
A lot of emotion here. That must have felt good to release.
A lot of intense and raw emotion flowing through this poem.
Beautifully penned.
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Powerful words . . . visceral and intense. Well done!
So very intimate and public at the same time. Thank you for your words
Thank you and thanks Rose for the prompt, you are doing a great job on them….I’m enjoying contributing….