Photo Challenge #55, Storm, April 07, 2015 – A Page of Your Mind

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Photo credit: Kimerajam

You didn’t know did you?

Clueless.

It was common knowledge.

So much passed you by

As you buried your mind

In mindless drivel;

So we thought.

But you were astute

Perceptive

Far more than we gave you credit

Your mind on a different level

Your heart seeking the unknown,

Oblivious

To those who loved you

Cared for you.

For you were driven

Reckless in pursuit

Of mysterious voices

Truths yet to be told

But kept prisoner in your psyche,

Festering there

Looking and waiting a day of reckoning

When unleashed

A new dawn would arrive.

I knew you then

But to you I was a predator

Another monster to stay well clear of.

It took years, so many years

To see I was no villain.

Then a day where you saw no threat

When as a sign of acceptance,

You passed to me a page of your mind.

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11 Responses to Photo Challenge #55, Storm, April 07, 2015 – A Page of Your Mind

  1. A demonic inference, perhaps I have my own interpretation though.

  2. Blogger's avatar mandy smith says:

    A bit haunting–losing one’s mind can be, and is never understood by “normal” people. Coming back from that can only be thrilling. Am I close? I’m reading a memoir by a New York Post reporter called “Brain On Fire.” She actually lost her mind for a month and was nearly put in an insane asylum until they discovered it was a rare disease where a person actually loses their mind–in olden days people with this were thought to be possessed by demons (as in The Exorcist). (Luckily with proper diagnosis it can be treated!.) I really enjoyed this!

    • As you know the damaged people of this world will often operate in a different space to the rest of us ‘normal’ ones. To break down those protective walls sometimes requires great patience and commitment. Trust is a such a powerful place to be in and a very lonely vulnerable one when you don’t have any in those around you.

  3. RoSy's avatar RoSy says:

    Awww…if only the trust was there from the beginning. Not always easy when past experiences put us on guard.

  4. mj6969's avatar mj6969 says:

    This is by far, one of the the strongest, most poignant pieces I’ve read, of yours, to date. Michael, you capture essences deeply profound and yet so Truthful (yes, capital “T” as in Universal) is to weep.

    Well done my friend, well done.

  5. Georgia's avatar Bastet says:

    I loved the descriptive imagery you put into this poem and the conclusive line added that wonderful sense of fulfillment that is the reward for loving and earning someone’s trust. A very poignant write, Michael.

  6. C.C.'s avatar C.C. says:

    This is a brilliantly descriptive concept….passing on to someone a page of her mind. Clever and so provocative. Love it 🙂

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