Mondays Finish the Story – Jan. 12th, 2015 – The Green Blobs


Finish the story begins with:  “Racing down into the atmosphere, the unidentified object crashed, leaving behind one heck of a huge crater and a plume of smoke that could be seen from miles around.”

The two green blobs looked around, the crater was impressive, the smoke a perfect screen.

This was their first visit to this planet. They knew from previous visits that it was inhabited by an odd two-legged creature only to happy to make a lot of noise when cornered.

The blobbier of the two blobs opened the door and peered out. He communicated in the manner of grunts and scratches.

The less blobbier blob scratched back, in a way that made your blood curdle.

They had a mission to fulfil. Two days to gather at least one of the creatures they came across and bring that being back to their home planet.

A being in a large yellow coat appeared at the edge of the crater. In a wink of an eye he was gone.

The blobs couldn’t believe their luck as they sailed quietly away into the universe.

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22 Responses to Mondays Finish the Story – Jan. 12th, 2015 – The Green Blobs

  1. Ah the blobbier of the blobs…that says it all 😉

  2. babso2you says:

    Love the blobbier blob! Great story! Thanks for participating! Stay tuned for next week’s challenge! 🙂

  3. penshift says:

    I was trying to figure out how a blob could be less blobby forever. Best use of my time today, after writing. 🙂

    • Well consider it a little like we humans, we would always agree I think that some humans are more human than others. The Blobs exist a similar way. Thanks so much for your comment, glad it gave you something to think about.

  4. Yinglan says:

    So I see you went with the traditional green aliens, great take! 🙂

    By the way, is “blobbier blog” supposed to be “blobbier blob”?

  5. Blobs sounds as attractive as Vogons

  6. John Yeo says:

    Green is the colour of the shape shifting amorphous blobs~I love your tke on the prompt

  7. draliman says:

    I loved “The blobbier of the two blobs”! I wonder what’s in store for the poor chap in the yellow coat?

  8. afairymind says:

    Great take on the challenge. A flying visit from the blobs! I have a feeling that the man in yellow is going to have some interesting days ahead of him. 🙂

  9. milliethom says:

    I love this amusingly blobby little story. The phrase ‘blobbier of the two blobs’ is hilarious.The man in the large yellow coat added an extra dimension, too. A colourful tale, all in all.

  10. Too bad for the cat?, but that’ll keep mankind safe for a while, hopefully. Funny and well done, Michael. 🙂 — Suzanne

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