Poetry Prompt 13 – No Punctuation – discourse on love

write-a-poem-which-features-no-punctuation-other-than-line-breaks

im asking you a question is this

or that

or something else

what you mean

one day not far from here in a little green

field

there will

sit a

blue box

with a painted

outside

that will say

please sir if you can

assist id appreciate it as

i have no visible signs of

help in this dog eat dog world

so if you

can

help that would be nice

if you call me at onehindredsixfoureightteheleven

ill get back to you in no time

in your case

a probably long

time as

I have been

known to

be a right

slacker

with me grammar and me

spellin isnt so good neither

oh #@#$%$#^&%$^$& and *&^$$%*$@%$@%

so don’t wait up

i

may be a

while

or even longer as this

poems takin

me an

eternity to

write

 

Written for: http://pookypoetry.wordpress.com/2014/05/13/poetry-prompt-13-no-punctuation/

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15 Responses to Poetry Prompt 13 – No Punctuation – discourse on love

  1. Suzanne's avatar Suzanne says:

    Another laugh out loud poem – this one’s a cracker. 🙂

  2. So hard to NOT use punctuation when we are so used to it. This must have killed you and ha ha at the expletives. Nice one chookas.

  3. PookyH's avatar PookyH says:

    This was fun to read! I think I’m going to find mine hard to write…

  4. RoSy's avatar RoSy says:

    This just made me realize – that even if I think that I don’t always use punctuation – that I do.
    I’m just inconsistent.

  5. JackieP's avatar JackieP says:

    What fun! I bet it was hard to write this in one sitting without using punctuation. It really makes you look at what you are writing.

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