Poem 68

trust

She said talk to me.

Tell me the secrets you hide.

Why? I asked

Because then I’ll begin to know you.

But isn’t this enough

No never. I wont tire of you.

But you may not like what you hear.

Let me be the judge of that.

You are asking a lot.

I know, trust?

Do I trust you?

Yes?

Yes.

Then open your heart to me.

 

‘You are asking me

To bear my soul

Allow you into places no one has been

My deepest dark regions

Where sentinels guard

And locks hold fast

Against any intruder,

And should any penetrate

A shut down can instantly occur.

Be awry of what you ask for.’

 

It’s about trust.

You’ll judge me

No, I’ll listen.

Really?

Yes.

I’m unsure.

Give me your hand. Now you can begin.

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29 Responses to Poem 68

  1. Hmm I like and how guarded we can be, trust a big issue, written well my friend.

  2. stenoves's avatar stenoves says:

    I can see myself in your flowing poem :-). Thanks

  3. Gabriella's avatar Gabriella says:

    Great reflection on a key issue in any healthy and serious relationship!

  4. marysue128's avatar marysue128 says:

    I could relate to the feelings you’ve written beautifully in the poem. Developing trust takes ages, however it can crumble into pieces very easily.

  5. JackieP's avatar JackieP says:

    Trust is serious. Trust is hope and trust can be the opening of great things. Wonderful poem.

  6. Beautiful – the tentative move towards trust, the knowledge of the import of that step…wonderfully expressed! 🙂 🙂

  7. Writer Adam Hughes's avatar Adam Hughes says:

    I can see a bit of me in that poem. Thank-You 🙂

  8. gimpet's avatar gimpet says:

    I find trust to be dependent on the person. I can trust one person in a very short time and another, well, never. It’s about intuition for me.

  9. So love this…so real to many people; Fritz Perls, I believe quoted something like “If I show you who I am, what have I left for me?”

  10. RoSy's avatar RoSy says:

    I trust with caution. I don’t like that. But – life experiences have taught me that that’s the way to go.

  11. Anja's avatar Anja says:

    WP won’t let me like it.
    Oh trust…..such a gift and yet so many throw it away easily.

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