Poem 46

waking-up

I wake at odd hours

Glance at my clock

It never lies

Never what I want to see.

I want the hours to pass

For the darkness to end

I can’t wait for the dawn.

That moment when you realise

A new day is emerging.

The arrival of first light

Brings a flurry of activity,

Letters to read, letters to write

Comments to make and replies to address

Laughter and mirth

Satire and comment

Smiles all round at the HA’s and the LOL’s.

Then the clock rudely interrupts

Without compassion

Tells me

Be quick

Out of bed mister

Your day has begun

There’s work to be had.

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25 Responses to Poem 46

  1. Anja's avatar Anja says:

    hahahaha Ohhhhh sleep…..it is a cruel thing for me. One day I hope I can sleep soundly and be able to actually sleep in. By sleeping in, I mean past 5am. UGH

  2. Cool poem, but I must admit I’m the opposite – I always want there to be or time to sleep left when I look at the clock, not less… I must be inherently lazy I suppose, LOL!!

  3. you can have the waking up early, though my sleep in these days is 8.30, which technically speaking is not really a sleep in. When summer hits us (if and when) I shall be up earlier …possibly to make the most of the day s HA and LOL to you 🙂

  4. I haven’t slept in for years everyday weekend or not 6 o’clock sometimes it is agony especially in the winter when it is dark and cold! In order to sleep I find I have to exercise very intensely otherwise no sleep.I can be emotionally and mentally exhausted but alas I have to wear my body out.

    • I haven’t slept in either, though do not have a lot of trouble going to sleep, but I do have trouble staying asleep, a small half tablet helps now days with that. I have noticed that my sleep behaviours have changed a lot since I have been on my own. Thanks Yves, I didn’t realise this poem would generate such discussion, but very happy it has.

  5. atrm61's avatar atrm61 says:

    So true-I can so relate to this-had some free time today afternoon(or so I thought)-decided to catch forty winks-ah,did not even get 10 with phone calls and visitors and courier chap-gah!

  6. RoSy's avatar RoSy says:

    🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
    I have found recently that warm tea before bed helps calm me down & put me to sleep rather quickly. Right now – believe it or not – is a soothing eggnog tea – something hubby thought I’d like & he bought it for me. He was right!
    🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

    • How lucky you are RoSy to such a thoughtful husband. I hope you are sleeping peacefully as i write this reply. Thanks for the excellent comment and all those happy smiley faces, the most I have ever seen.

  7. PookyH's avatar PookyH says:

    This feels far too familiar. There is no lonelier place than a house full of sleeping people when you can’t get to sleep…but why does sleep always eventually find us when it’s time to get up?!

  8. Gabriella's avatar Gabriella says:

    “Never what I want to see” – for me this is when I see 5:45 and am supposed to get up a half hour later and it is no use trying to go back to sleep. Great poem which reflects my own experience with sleepless nights.

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