Līgo Haibun Challenge – Word Prompt – Treasure


My chosen word is Treasure

I am looking now and entranced in the beauty before me.

Never have I seen such magnificence.

Each jewel has been so polished,  the suns rays are reflected from a thousand different faces.

We are enthralled, held in our step as we survey the scene.

Each mind is dreaming of the impossible, the implausible, the unthinkable.

We breathe deeply, no one speaks, we stand transfixed by the this bounty that could be ours.

The riot of colours, the shades of green, the brilliance of lustre, captivates us we endeavour to take in the grandeur before us.

Brilliance of bounty

Enthrals and captivates us

The treasure ours.

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13 Responses to Līgo Haibun Challenge – Word Prompt – Treasure

  1. well I hope you are going to share! Treasure in them there words my friend 🙂

  2. Cubby says:

    Your words are captivating. Once I start reading, I can’t tear my eyes away. Beautifully written. 🙂

  3. I am enthralled and captivated after reading this! Well done 🙂

  4. Ye Pirate says:

    Ahhh…beautiful haibun for a pirate! But very nicely written,with words chosen for the brilliance in imagery. I enjoyed this very much,and such treasure does give a nice feeling.

  5. Sun says:

    me loves a bountiful treasure! so glad you decided to share some. 🙂

  6. Ese' s Voice says:

    Like a capture from a good movie – so vividly and wonderfully expressed that took me along, there, exactly in that moment. Really enjoyed!

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