Friday Fictioneers – Precious Bits

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Augustus Schafer ran the Central Precious Bits outlet.

His days he knew were coming to an end.

His doctor had warned him.

He had become wayward in recent days. Precious bits were found left on the counter while he went to the toilet.

His son, Augustine, made a move to shut his father down.

It was only a matter of time before Augustus discredited the entire family.

It came to a head when Augustus was found in front of his stall, his precious Royal Doulton at his feet, customers ducking and weaving as he frisbeed the plates across the mall.

 

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39 Responses to Friday Fictioneers – Precious Bits

  1. Oh Nooo not the Royal Doulton??! Poor Augustine off you trot … 🙂

  2. Sandra's avatar Sandra says:

    Going out in style. Don’t you just love a dramatic exit… Nicely done.

  3. Baigneur des Bois's avatar Ye Pirate says:

    He’s surely right, in his own way!

  4. claudia's avatar claudia says:

    Oh, a sad ending for that china!

  5. Gabriella's avatar Gabriella says:

    Lovely ending! I wonder where Augustus is now!

  6. If you’re being pushed out, may as well go with a bang as a whimper! Nice tale, made me smile!

  7. JackieP's avatar JackieP says:

    He must have known he was being pushed out. Not good for the china though. Good story.

    • Michael's avatar summerstommy2 says:

      Thanks Jackie you are right not a good look for the shop though there is the consideration of the joy gus was having at the time. I am sure by now he is highly medicated.

  8. Joe Owens's avatar Joe Owens says:

    Exactly what i was thinking about going out with a memorable performance!

  9. draliman's avatar draliman says:

    Loved the ending, and I particularly loved the word “frisbeed”!
    Poor Augustus.

    • Michael's avatar summerstommy2 says:

      Thank you dear reader for your comment. I think frisbeed is a ‘new’ word as such as my dictionary didn’t want to know about it.

  10. Dear Summerstommy,

    I can see the plates flying now. Fun story.

    shalom,

    Rochelle

  11. nightlake's avatar nightlake says:

    Poor man..amusing, but kind of sad too

  12. Sun's avatar Sunshine says:

    well worth the big mess at the end 🙂

  13. dmmacilroy's avatar dmmacilroy says:

    Dear Summerstommy,

    i have a passion for discs and a penchant for throwing them so I identified with Augustus and sympathize with his plight. Great story and a nice evocation of the prompt.

    Aloha,

    Doug

  14. Ah.. not much left for Augustine now I guess…

  15. Couldn’t help but be amused by that final image, even if it is at the expense of your character’s failing health. I can just see those plates flying! Ron

  16. vb guenther's avatar vbholmes says:

    I think he’d be lucky to end up with a broom and dust pan and not in a padded cell. An afternoon spent frisbeeing the Royal Doulton could warrant that..

  17. julespaige's avatar julespaige says:

    Maybe he was reliving the memories of a Greek wedding? But the good china – ouch!

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