24 Responses to Trifextra Challenge – Bedtime Story

1. bloomnpsycho says:

   August 24, 2013 at 9:32 am

   Can I borrow them? Although these days, they’d have to say “Sleep for once, Snarky Fat Broad! The bills and housework will still be there tomorrow!”

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   • summerstommy2 says:

     August 24, 2013 at 9:34 am

     I’ll see if I can send them over. Funny you folk/s make me laugh.

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     • summerstommy2 says:

       August 24, 2013 at 9:35 am

       Thanks for following my blog.
2. Anja says:

   August 24, 2013 at 12:18 pm

   I am a huge fan of fairy tales 🙂

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   • summerstommy2 says:

     August 24, 2013 at 12:21 pm

     Thank you Anja, they are such fun to pay with though we had to be ‘nice’ in what we wrote this week. Have you read the two sentence horror stories?

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     • Anja says:

       August 24, 2013 at 12:23 pm

       Wait…its a whole week of nice? I thought just one prompt. Oops. ha I am afraid I have not read two sentence horror stories….should I mention I scare REALLY easy. lol
     • summerstommy2 says:

       August 24, 2013 at 12:28 pm

       You can Google them, some are very clever…I thought of one as I wrote my story it goes something like: ‘Father is putting his daughter to bed and she says daddy there is something under my bed. The father looks under the bed and sees his daughter hiding there saying daddy there’s something in my bed.’
     • Anja says:

       August 24, 2013 at 12:30 pm

       Oh I really love that one and it just triggers such a repeated image in my mind. I will look them up as soon as I figure out this ecstasy/illusion prompt. I have written 3 and they merged. UGH my mind
     • summerstommy2 says:

       August 24, 2013 at 12:29 pm

       http://www.listener.co.nz/commentary/the-internaut/two-sentence-horror-stories-10-of-the-best/
     • Anja says:

       August 24, 2013 at 12:30 pm

       ha you are fast.
3. stankmeaner says:

   August 24, 2013 at 2:18 pm

   I really loved this one, something about the idea of flitting fairies dancing around the bed just made me smile.

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   • summerstommy2 says:

     August 24, 2013 at 2:23 pm

     Thanks I am glad you enjoyed my story.

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4. freyathewriter says:

   August 24, 2013 at 5:42 pm

   I loved that last line. So full of hope and promise 🙂

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   • summerstommy2 says:

     August 24, 2013 at 9:34 pm

     Thanks Freya, lad you enjoyed it.

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5. Gabriella says:

   August 24, 2013 at 9:10 pm

   Nice lullaby with a great ending line.

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   • summerstommy2 says:

     August 24, 2013 at 9:25 pm

     Thank you Gabriella. Lovely as always to receive your comments.

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     • Gabriella says:

       August 24, 2013 at 9:27 pm

       🙂
6. jannatwrites says:

   August 25, 2013 at 4:19 am

   I love the last line. What a wonderful thought to go to sleep with!

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   • summerstommy2 says:

     August 25, 2013 at 5:22 am

     Thank you Janna that is a lovely comment, and yes it is a positive thought to go to sleep with.

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7. Draug419 says:

   August 25, 2013 at 8:39 pm

   Any fairies fluttering over me have to contend with my cats, so I don’t see them as often as I need!
   This is a sweet story.

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   • summerstommy2 says:

     August 26, 2013 at 11:07 am

     Thanks Draug I appreciate you reading my posts.

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8. Sunshine says:

   August 25, 2013 at 8:42 pm

   who can resist bedtime stories with fairies to lull and tuck you in safely. i also love this story. ♥

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   • summerstommy2 says:

     August 26, 2013 at 11:07 am

     Thanks Sunshine you are very kind in your comments.

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     • Sunshine says:

       August 26, 2013 at 11:55 am

       you’re welcome 🙂 have a great week!